List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'stop' thay vì 'shop', 'kiss me' thay vì 'keep me'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ đúng và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể được rút gọn để tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. I prefer to write it down on paper before I go shopping.

提案: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có ý kiến cá nhân, tuy nhiên câu cuối 'I think this can be too strict' chưa rõ nghĩa và hơi mơ hồ. Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn lý do không làm danh sách và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I prefer to keep track of my tasks in my head. I find that making strict lists can be limiting, and I like to stay flexible with how I manage my work.

提案: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, ví dụ 'making this' nên là 'making lists', và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa 'prefer teachers that working on the test'. Bạn cần sử dụng từ chính xác và câu rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng.

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to rely on their memory instead.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi chính tả và từ vựng không chính xác như 'cursing things up' thay vì 'crossing things off'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ đúng và tránh lỗi chính tả để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing things down. It's easier for me to remember tasks that way, and I like crossing things off the list when I finish them.

× Yes, I make a list when I stop it help me remember that what I need to buy and kiss me from spending too much money.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop; it helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money.

The original sentence contains incorrect verb forms and word choices. 'stop' should be 'shop' to match the context. 'it help' should be 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'kiss me' is incorrect and should be 'keeps me' to convey the intended meaning. Also, 'that what I need to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'what I need to buy'. The sentence is corrected to use proper verb forms and word choices to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer to keep track of my tasks in my head and I think this can be too strict and I'd like to be more flexible with my work.

✓ I prefer to keep track of my tasks in my head because I think making lists can be too strict, and I'd like to be more flexible with my work.

The original sentence uses 'this can be too strict' which is vague and unclear. The modal verb 'can' is used correctly but the subject 'this' is ambiguous. Clarifying that 'making lists' can be too strict improves clarity. Also, connecting the ideas with 'because' improves sentence structure and meaning.

× I think some people don't like making this because they think it takes too much time.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'making lists'. It should be replaced with the noun 'lists' to clearly indicate what is being referred to. Pronouns should clearly refer to a specific noun to avoid confusion.

× They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it out, so they prefer teachers that working on the test.

✓ They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it out, so they prefer tasks that involve working on the test.

The phrase 'prefer teachers that working on the test' is incorrect. 'Teachers' is likely a mistake for 'tasks' or 'things'. Also, 'that working' should be 'that involve working' or 'that work'. The pronoun and noun usage is incorrect and unclear, so it is corrected to 'tasks that involve working on the test' to make sense in context.

× I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× It's easier for me to remember things that way, and I try cursing things up the list when I'm done.

✓ It's easier for me to remember things that way, and I try crossing things off the list when I'm done.

The phrase 'cursing things up the list' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'crossing things off the list', which means to mark items as completed. The preposition 'off' is necessary here to convey the correct meaning.