List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and avoiding repeated phrases. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before visiting the supermarket or mall because it helps me remember essential items and save money. Moreover, I prefer to make the list on my mobile phone for convenience.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use proper verb forms. Also, use linking words to explain how making lists helps you.

例: Yes, I make a list every day for my schedule and tasks. It helps me to organise and focus on my work. Whenever I complete a task, I erase it from my notebook, which gives me a sense of achievement.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct sentence structures. Also, provide specific reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

例: There are several reasons why some people don't like making lists. Firstly, it can be time-consuming. Secondly, some people have a sharp memory, so they feel they don't need to make lists.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct articles and adverbs, and make your sentences more natural and fluent.

例: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easily accessible, and I can carry it with me anywhere.

× Yes, I usually make a list before I visit supermarket or mall.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I visit the supermarket or mall.

In English, when referring to specific places like 'supermarket' or 'mall' in a general sense, the definite article 'the' is used. Omitting 'the' before these nouns is incorrect.

× It helps me some essential need to buy per to buy things and also save a money.

✓ It helps me buy some essential things and also save money.

The original sentence misuses quantifiers and articles. 'Some essential need to buy per to buy things' is incorrect; it should be 'some essential things'. Also, 'a money' is incorrect because 'money' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'.

× I usually prefer a make list in mobile.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my mobile.

The phrase 'a make list' is incorrect; it should be 'to make a list'. Also, 'in mobile' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' and 'my mobile' is more natural.

× Yes, I every day make a list for my daily schedule and my task.

✓ Yes, I make a list every day for my daily schedule and my tasks.

The adverbial phrase 'every day' should be placed correctly, and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Also, 'I every day make' is less natural than 'I make a list every day'.

× Whenever I complete task, I erase them from my notebook and.

✓ Whenever I complete a task, I erase it from my notebook.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Also, 'task' should be singular with an article 'a' and 'them' should be 'it' to agree with singular 'task'.

× There are several results due to some people don't making a list.

✓ There are several reasons why some people don't make a list.

The phrase 'several results due to' is incorrect; 'several reasons why' is appropriate. Also, 'don't making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make'.

× One of the most reason is it is a very time consumer mobile and also another reason is some people have a sharp memory so they don't need to to making a.

✓ One of the main reasons is that making a list is very time-consuming, and another reason is that some people have a sharp memory, so they don't need to make one.

The phrase 'most reason' should be 'main reasons'. 'Time consumer mobile' is incorrect; it should be 'time-consuming'. 'Don't need to to making a' is incorrect; it should be 'don't need to make one'.

× I usually prefer to make list on my phone because it is a easily accessible and also I am a easily carry with me any place.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easily accessible, and I can easily carry it with me anywhere.

'Make list' needs the article 'a'. 'A easily accessible' is incorrect; 'easily accessible' is correct without 'a'. 'I am a easily carry' is incorrect; it should be 'I can easily carry it'. 'Any place' is better expressed as 'anywhere'.