List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并且避免重复。可以用更连贯的句子表达原因。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting important items.

提案: 句子结构不够清晰，表达有些混乱。建议使用更准确的语法结构，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized and reduce stress by preventing last-minute rushes before deadlines.

提案: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更明确的观点。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they are already well organized and feel that making lists might cause them unnecessary stress.

提案: 回答较为自然，但可以使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient to check them anytime and easy to edit whenever I need to.

× Yes, it's easy to know what I want to buy and I can avoid that I forget to buy something.

✓ Yes, it's easy to know what I want to buy and I can avoid forgetting to buy something.

动词avoid后应接动名词形式forgetting，而不是that引导的从句。避免使用that从句，改为动名词形式更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, it can make me feel well organized and reduce my stress to avoid the last minute of the deadline.

✓ Yes, it can make me feel well organized and reduce my stress to avoid the last minute before the deadline.

短语'the last minute of the deadline'不正确，应使用'the last minute before the deadline'表示截止日期前的最后一分钟。介词使用错误导致表达不清。

× Because they contemplate they are well organized and maybe they making this may feel stress for them and they have the confidence to well organized.

✓ Because they think they are well organized and maybe making lists may cause them stress, and they have the confidence to be well organized.

动词contemplate用法不当，应改为think；they making应改为making lists；feel stress for them表达不自然，应改为cause them stress；to well organized缺少动词be。代词和动词形式使用错误，导致句子不通顺。

× Because they contemplate they are well organized and maybe they making this may feel stress for them and they have the confidence to well organized.

✓ Because they think they are well organized and maybe making lists may cause them stress, and they have the confidence to be well organized.

短语'making this may feel stress for them'中介词和表达不当，应改为'making lists may cause them stress'。介词和表达方式错误影响句意。

× Because they contemplate they are well organized and maybe they making this may feel stress for them and they have the confidence to well organized.

✓ Because they think they are well organized and maybe making lists may cause them stress, and they have the confidence to be well organized.

代词they在句中多次重复且用法不当，应简化表达，避免冗余。

× I like to make this on my phone because it's easy to check anytime and it's easy to change.

✓ I like to make lists on my phone because it's easy to check anytime and easy to change.

代词this指代不明确，应明确为lists，避免歧义。

× I like to make this on my phone because it's easy to check anytime and it's easy to change.

✓ I like to make lists on my phone because it's easy to check anytime and easy to change.

句中重复使用it's easy不够简洁，第二处可省略主语和谓语，使句子更流畅。