List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some language errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating the same idea (e.g., 'stay under my budget' twice) and correct small mistakes like 'lid' instead of 'list' and 'pending' instead of 'spending'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me avoid impulse spending and stay within my budget. Moreover, having the list on my phone or paper ensures I don't forget any important items. Therefore, I find this method very efficient.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'and it keeps it'. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating 'also' multiple times in one sentence.

例: Although I am a student and don't have a job, I make lists for my exams and assignments. This helps me stay organized because I know what tasks to do and when. Additionally, it saves me time and is very convenient and flexible.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear linking words. Try to organize your points logically and avoid repeating similar phrases like 'trust their mind' and 'trust their brain'. Also, correct phrases like 'making these' to 'making lists'.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it takes too much time. Instead, they trust their memory and feelings, confident they won't forget anything. They also feel less pressured when shopping without a list and prefer not to waste time writing or using their phone.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions like 'it's categorizes' and 'I need to buy the least'. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer explanations. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I use both paper and my phone for lists, but I mostly prefer my phone because I always have it with me. There are apps that help me organize my shopping list by categorizing items based on priority, which helps me manage my money efficiently.

× Yes, I do make a lid when I go to shopping because I do think that making the list really helps me to stay under my budget to avoid impulses pending and also it keeps me under my budget.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I think that making a list really helps me stay within my budget to avoid impulse spending and also keeps me under my budget.

The word 'lid' is a typo and should be 'list' (singular). 'Go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping' without 'to'. 'Impulses pending' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'impulse spending'. Also, 'stay under my budget' is better expressed as 'stay within my budget'. These corrections address singular/plural issues and proper phrase usage.

× Yes, I do make a lid when I go to shopping because I do think that making the list really helps me to stay under my budget to avoid impulses pending and also it keeps me under my budget.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because I think that making a list really helps me stay within my budget to avoid impulse spending and also keeps me under my budget.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct preposition usage is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'stay under my budget' should be 'stay within my budget' to correctly express staying inside budget limits.

× And I also when I have list on my phone and my paper, I don't forget anything important or useful when I have to go to the supermarket to buy things.

✓ And also, when I have a list on my phone and on paper, I don't forget anything important or useful when I go to the supermarket to buy things.

The word 'list' is singular and needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'my paper' should be 'on paper' to correctly express the medium. These corrections fix singular/plural and article usage.

× And I also when I have list on my phone and my paper, I don't forget anything important or useful when I have to go to the supermarket to buy things.

✓ And also, when I have a list on my phone and on paper, I don't forget anything important or useful when I go to the supermarket to buy things.

The phrase 'my paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper' to indicate the medium where the list is kept.

× As I am a student I don't go to work but for my exams and for my additional works I do make a list which helps me to stay organized, that I know when and why I have to do that work and it keeps it.

✓ As I am a student, I don't go to work, but for my exams and additional work, I do make a list which helps me stay organized so that I know when and why I have to do that work and it keeps me on track.

The phrase 'for my additional works' is incorrect; 'additional work' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. Also, 'keeps it' is unclear; 'keeps me on track' or similar is better. Prepositions and article usage are corrected here.

× As I am a student I don't go to work but for my exams and for my additional works I do make a list which helps me to stay organized, that I know when and why I have to do that work and it keeps it.

✓ As I am a student, I don't go to work, but for my exams and additional work, I do make a list which helps me stay organized so that I know when and why I have to do that work and it keeps me on track.

The sentence is a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Adding commas and using 'so that' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Some people think that making these is time consuming and they just trust their mind and they just trust their brain because they know they won't forget anything and they don't.

✓ Some people think that making lists is time-consuming and they just trust their mind and brain because they know they won't forget anything.

The word 'these' is vague; 'lists' is more precise. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. Also, 'mind and brain' is better without repeating 'they just trust' twice. These corrections improve quantifier and adjective usage.

× Some people think that making these is time consuming and they just trust their mind and they just trust their brain because they know they won't forget anything and they don't.

✓ Some people think that making lists is time-consuming and they just trust their mind and brain because they know they won't forget anything.

The phrase 'they don't' at the end is redundant and unclear. Removing it clarifies the sentence. Also, combining 'mind and brain' without repeating 'they just trust' improves pronoun usage and sentence flow.

× They won't be under pressure when they go shopping and they just trust their feelings and trust themselves and not just waste time on writing on paper or just running on a phone for some things.

✓ They won't be under pressure when they go shopping; they just trust their feelings and themselves and don't want to waste time writing on paper or using their phone for some things.

The sentence has multiple 'and's causing confusion. Using a semicolon and restructuring improves clarity. Also, 'running on a phone' is incorrect; 'using their phone' is better. These corrections address conjunction and phrase usage.

× They just trust their feelings and trust themselves and not just waste time on writing on paper or just running on a phone for some things.

✓ They just trust their feelings and themselves and don't want to waste time writing on paper or using their phone for some things.

The phrase 'waste time on writing' should be 'waste time writing' without 'on'. Also, 'running on a phone' is incorrect; 'using their phone' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I use both but I mostly use phone because I have always with me because I always need it and I have apps on my phone which tells me to organize everything I need to buy and also it's categorizes my list for the products which I need to buy the most.

✓ I use both, but I mostly use my phone because I always have it with me and need it. I have apps on my phone which tell me to organize everything I need to buy, and they also categorize my list for the products I need to buy the most.

The word 'phone' needs a possessive pronoun 'my'. 'I have always with me' is incorrect; correct is 'I always have it with me'. 'Apps... which tells' should be 'apps... which tell' to agree in number. 'It's categorizes' is incorrect; should be 'they also categorize'. These corrections fix singular/plural and subject-verb agreement.

× I have apps on my phone which tells me to organize everything I need to buy and also it's categorizes my list for the products which I need to buy the most.

✓ I have apps on my phone which tell me to organize everything I need to buy, and they also categorize my list for the products I need to buy the most.

The subject 'apps' is plural, so the verb should be 'tell' not 'tells'. Also, 'it's categorizes' is incorrect; it should be 'they also categorize' to agree with plural subject 'apps'.

× I use both but I mostly use phone because I have always with me because I always need it and I have apps on my phone which tells me to organize everything I need to buy and also it's categorizes my list for the products which I need to buy the most.

✓ I use both, but I mostly use my phone because I always have it with me and need it. I have apps on my phone which tell me to organize everything I need to buy, and they also categorize my list for the products I need to buy the most.

The phrase 'I have always with me' is missing the object 'it'. Correct pronoun usage requires 'I always have it with me'. Also, 'it's categorizes' is incorrect pronoun and verb form; 'they also categorize' is correct.