List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不完整，建议加强语法练习，尤其是动词形式和连词的使用。同时，回答可以更自然流畅，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items and saves time during shopping.

提案: 回答缺少主语和时态错误，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，并增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I think making a list at work is important because it helps me organize my thoughts clearly and stay focused.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议学习如何正确使用数词和形容词，避免语法错误，并用更自然的表达方式说明原因。

例: I think there are two main reasons: first, some young people find it complicated to make clear lists; second, some people are simply too lazy to do it.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，并解释原因时使用连词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it gives me a sense of accomplishment and helps me prioritize urgent tasks first.

× I always make a list when I shop because list can remind me don't forget some important things I need and can save time.

✓ I always make a list when I shop because a list can remind me not to forget some important things I need and can save time.

这里的“list”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词“a”。另外，句中缺少“not to”来构成完整的否定不定式。

× I think make a list in our work is important because making a list can organize our thoughts clearly.

✓ I think making a list in our work is important because making a list can organize our thoughts clearly.

动词“think”后面接动名词作主语时，应该用“making”而不是“make”。

× I think have a 2 main reasons.

✓ I think there are two main reasons.

“reason”是可数名词，复数形式应为“reasons”，且句子缺少“there are”结构来表达“有”。数字“2”应写为“two”以符合正式书面语。

× 1 is that it is complex for young people to making a clearly list and another reason is that they are lazy to do some list.

✓ One is that it is complex for young people to make a clear list, and another reason is that they are lazy to make some lists.

“to”后面应接动词原形“make”，而不是动名词“making”。“clearly”是副词，应改为形容词“clear”修饰名词“list”。“some list”应为复数“some lists”。

× I prefer make a list on paper because it can give me a sense of accomplishment that makes me priority accomplishment, urgent things first.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it can give me a sense of accomplishment that helps me prioritize urgent things first.

“prefer”后面应接不定式“to make”，而不是动词原形“make”。“priority accomplishment”表达不清，应改为“prioritize urgent things”更符合语境。