List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复。可以用更自然的表达方式，比如强调列清单的好处。

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，建议注意时态和冠词的使用，同时可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list at work because it reminds me of important tasks and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议用更准确的句子结构，并具体说明原因。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated and stressful, especially young people.

提案: 回答较好，但开头的“Yes”不必要。建议直接回答问题，并用连接词丰富句子。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because it helps me organize my thoughts clearly and gives me a sense of accomplishment.

× Yes, when I working I always make a list because the list can remind me to do some important things and can give me sense of accomplishment.

✓ Yes, when I am working I always make a list because the list can remind me to do some important things and can give me a sense of accomplishment.

句子中缺少助动词“am”，导致动词“working”不能正确构成现在进行时。正确的表达是“when I am working”，表示正在进行的动作。

× I think it have two reasons.

✓ I think it has two reasons.

主语“it”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。

× One reason is it is complex for young people to make a list.

✓ One reason is that it is complex for young people to make a list.

在“reason is”后面应使用连接词“that”引导宾语从句，使句子结构完整。

× Another reason is that making list is is can provide stress for young people.

✓ Another reason is that making a list can provide stress for young people.

句子中重复使用“is”，且缺少冠词“a”修饰“list”，应删除多余的“is”并加上冠词。

× Yes, I prefer make a list on paper because it can give me a sense of accomplishment and it can organize my thoughts clearly.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on paper because it can give me a sense of accomplishment and it can organize my thoughts clearly.

动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”，而不是直接接动词原形。