List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'shape a lot of money by stick my bucket' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu cú tự nhiên hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember all the necessary items. By writing everything down, I can avoid forgetting important things and also save a lot of money by sticking to my budget.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'I definitely I often' là lỗi lặp từ, và câu cần được sắp xếp lại để mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và cụ thể hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng.

例: Yes, I often make a list related to my educational goals and future intentions. It gives me energy and strong motivation to move forward, helping me work more effectively.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'necessary talks' nên là 'necessary tasks'. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory. For example, they believe they can remember all the necessary tasks without writing them down, so they often start working immediately without preparing a list.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và từ vựng phù hợp, ví dụ 'leaned towards' nên là 'lean towards' hoặc 'prefer'. Câu cũng cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I can carry it with me anytime and anywhere, which allows me to update my plans easily and immediately.

× By noting everything down on paper, I can avoid forgetting the important items and also shape a lot of money by stick my bucket.

✓ By noting everything down on paper, I can avoid forgetting the important items and also save a lot of money by sticking to my budget.

The phrase 'shape a lot of money by stick my bucket' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'save a lot of money by sticking to my budget'. 'Save' is the appropriate verb for money, and 'sticking to my budget' uses the gerund form after the preposition 'by'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I definitely I often make my own educational list which include my goals, my intention in the future.

✓ I definitely often make my own educational list which includes my goals and my intentions for the future.

The subject 'list' is singular, so the verb should be 'includes' instead of 'include'. Also, 'intention' should be plural 'intentions' to match 'goals', and 'in the future' is better expressed as 'for the future'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper pluralization.

× It brings me full of energy and strong motivation to step towards so that I can work effectively.

✓ It fills me with energy and strong motivation to move forward so that I can work effectively.

The phrase 'brings me full of energy' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'fills me with energy'. Also, 'step towards' is incomplete and unclear; 'move forward' is a better choice. This correction improves idiomatic usage and clarity.

× Some people dislike making a list because they find it time consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead.

✓ Some people dislike making a list because they find it time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory instead.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. This correction follows standard English grammar rules for compound adjectives.

× For example, they believe that they can remember all the necessary talks without noting them down on paper or phone, so they often start working immediately without preparing the list.

✓ For example, they believe that they can remember all the necessary tasks without noting them down on paper or phone, so they often start working immediately without preparing a list.

The word 'talks' is incorrect in this context; 'tasks' is appropriate. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' because it is not previously specified. This correction improves word choice and article usage.

× I leaned towards making a list on my own mobile phone because I can bring it by myself every time, anytime and anywhere so that I can change my future intention easily and immediately.

✓ I lean towards making a list on my own mobile phone because I can bring it with me every time, anytime, and anywhere so that I can change my future intentions easily and immediately.

The verb 'leaned' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'lean'. Also, 'bring it by myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring it with me'. 'Intention' should be plural 'intentions' to match the context. This correction ensures tense consistency and correct prepositional usage.