List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
I usually make a list when I shop because I think it will make me clear what I want to buy in the shop. For example, when I need something in my daily life, I will make a list about what I want to buy.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Of course I do. I had get into a habit of making this for work when I am a child. It certainly works and helps me a lot. For example, when I want to achieve a goal and then I will divide it into a lot of steps. I will achieve one step and.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
As far as I'm concerned, making list will give people a lot of stress and may make the opportunity less or give them some stressful experiences.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
In my experience, I prefer to make a list on my reasons first. It is more easier to make list on the phone. I can make my list whenever or wherever I want, but in the paper I should find a place or some time to do it.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构较为简单，且有些表达不够自然，例如“make me clear”应改为“help me be clear”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当丰富细节，使回答更流畅。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy. For instance, when I run out of daily essentials, I write them down to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“had get into”应为“have gotten into”，且句子不完整，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和语法，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。
例: Yes, I have developed the habit of making lists for work since I was a child. It definitely helps me stay organized because I break down my goals into smaller steps and complete them one by one.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中表达不够准确，且有语法错误，如“making list”应为“making lists”。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达，具体说明原因，并避免重复。
例: I think some people dislike making lists because it can feel stressful and limit their flexibility, making them worry about missing opportunities.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“more easier”应为“easier”，且表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的比较级，并明确表达偏好和原因。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier and more convenient. I can add items anytime and anywhere, unlike paper lists which require me to have the paper with me.
文法
× I had get into a habit of making this for work when I am a child.
✓ I had gotten into a habit of making this for work when I was a child.
这里使用过去完成时，动词get的过去分词是gotten，且时间点是过去，应该用was而不是am。动词时态和主语时间不一致导致错误。建议掌握过去完成时的正确用法和动词的过去分词形式。
× I will achieve one step and.
✓ I will achieve one step.
句子末尾出现了不完整的连接词“and”，导致句子结构不完整。建议避免句子残缺，确保句子完整表达意思。
× making list will give people a lot of stress and may make the opportunity less or give them some stressful experiences.
✓ making lists will give people a lot of stress and may reduce opportunities or give them some stressful experiences.
这里list应为复数形式lists，因为指的是一般意义上的多个清单。opportunity前缺少冠词且表达不准确，改为复数形式opportunities更合适。建议注意名词单复数和搭配的准确使用。
× It is more easier to make list on the phone.
✓ It is easier to make lists on the phone.
more easier是重复比较级，正确用法是直接用easier。list应为复数lists。建议避免重复比较级，掌握形容词比较级的正确形式。
× I prefer to make a list on my reasons first.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone first.
原句中my reasons不符合语境，应为my phone，且list前加冠词a。建议根据语境选择正确的名词，避免词语搭配错误。
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