List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni 'make list' er bodole 'make a list' bolben. Ar 'I forgot some items which I really essential' er jaygay 'I sometimes forget some essential items' bola bhalo. Apni answer ke aro natural korte chailen, sentence gulo ke shothik vabe link korte hobe.

例: Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping because sometimes I forget essential items for my job or home. Therefore, having a list helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni 'make list' er bodole 'make a list' bolben. 'It helps me to remember and keep alerting me in my brain' er jaygay aro natural vabe bolte paren. Apni linking words use korle answer ta aro fluent hobe.

例: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me remember the items I need to buy and tasks I need to complete. This method keeps me organized and has helped me a lot.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu unclear sentence ache, ar kichu grammar mistake ache. Apni 'I have no idea about this' er por kichu bhalo opinion dite paren. 'It takes time and it takes some patience with really not available for someone' er jaygay aro clear vabe bolte hobe. Apni linking words use korben jate answer ta logical hoy.

例: I am not completely sure, but I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time and requires patience, which they may not have. Therefore, they prefer to remember things without writing them down.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni 'make list' er bodole 'make a list' bolben. 'it help me to write the thing' er jaygay aro specific vabe bolte paren. Apni linking words use korben jate answer ta natural hoy.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's convenient to write things down. On the other hand, when I use paper, I often forget to keep it in my wallet, so using my phone is more reliable.

× Yes, I often make list when I go for shopping.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× Sometimes I forgot some items which I really essential for my job or for my home, so I took a list of them and go for market.

✓ Sometimes I forget some items which are really essential for my job or for my home, so I make a list of them and go to the market.

The verb 'forgot' should be in present tense 'forget' to match 'sometimes' indicating habitual action. 'Which I really essential' is missing the verb 'are'. 'Took a list' is incorrect; 'make a list' is appropriate. 'Go for market' should be 'go to the market'.

× Yes, I often make list for my job.

✓ Yes, I often make a list for my job.

The noun 'list' is singular and countable, so it needs the article 'a'.

× It helps me to remember the item I need to buy or something I need to do.

✓ It helps me to remember the items I need to buy or things I need to do.

'Item' and 'something' should be plural 'items' and 'things' to match the context of multiple tasks or purchases.

× It helps me to remember and keep alerting me in my brain and it really helped me a lot.

✓ It helps me to remember and keeps me alert, and it has really helped me a lot.

'Keep alerting me in my brain' is awkward; 'keeps me alert' is correct. Also, tense consistency requires 'keeps' and 'has helped'.

× Actually, I have no idea about this, but I think people don't like it because it takes time and it takes some patience with really not available for someone.

✓ Actually, I have no idea about this, but I think people don't like it because it takes time and patience, which some people really do not have.

The phrase 'with really not available for someone' is ungrammatical; it should be rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× So people don't like when they're on.

✓ So people don't like making lists when they are busy.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear; it needs to specify what 'on' refers to and complete the thought.

× I like to make list on my phone because I always carry my phone and it help me to write the thing.

✓ I like to make lists on my phone because I always carry my phone and it helps me to write things down.

'List' should be plural 'lists' to indicate general habit. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'The thing' is vague; 'things down' is more natural.

× When I really put something on my paper, I forgot most of the time to keep the paper in my wallet so keep the list in my phone.

✓ When I put something on paper, I often forget to keep the paper in my wallet, so I keep the list on my phone.

'Really put' is unnecessary; 'put' suffices. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match habitual action. 'Keep the list in my phone' should be 'keep the list on my phone'. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.