List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Uh, not really because I don't really shop for many things. Uh, I'm not an adult, I'm just a kid. So, uh, I'm not, uh, expected to buy groceries or anything like that. So usually when I shop, I just buy snacks or something simple.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Since I'm still a kid, I don't have a job so I don't have any serious work to do. My only job and only work I have to do is studying and school work or maybe extracurricular assignments. But I don't think I really need a list for that because it's not very complicating or hard.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I'm not quite sure. Maybe because they're lazy and it's tiring Because adults already have a lot on their plate and maybe they they think it's a waste of time.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I don't usually make this but whenever I do I always prefer to do it on my phone because it's more simple, easier and less tiring. It takes less effort and also I have my phone everywhere and I don't have pencils and or pens or paper everywhere so I think it's much easier to do it on phone.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 65.0提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'so' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, provide a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words to improve coherence.
例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only buy simple things like snacks. Since I'm still a kid, I don't have to buy groceries or many items, so making a list is unnecessary for me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repeating words like 'only' and 'work'.
例: I don't make lists for work because I don't have a job yet. My main responsibilities are studying and doing school assignments, which I find manageable without a list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 60.0提案: Avoid vague expressions like 'I'm not quite sure' and try to give more thoughtful reasons with clear linking words. Also, be careful with repetition and grammar to make your answer more effective.
例: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel it's time-consuming and adds to their stress. Additionally, adults often have many responsibilities, so they may see lists as an extra burden.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your reasons. Also, avoid minor grammar mistakes and use more precise vocabulary for clarity.
例: Although I rarely make lists, I prefer using my phone because it's simpler and more convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I don't need to worry about finding paper or pens, which makes the process easier and faster.
文法
× Maybe because they're lazy and it's tiring Because adults already have a lot on their plate and maybe they they think it's a waste of time.
✓ Maybe because they're lazy and it's tiring, because adults already have a lot on their plate and maybe they think it's a waste of time.
The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Because' to start a new clause without proper punctuation or conjunction, causing a run-on sentence. Adding a comma before 'because' and removing the repeated word 'they' corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.
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