List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如时态和冠词使用不当，且表达略显重复。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的连接词。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. For example, by sticking to my list, I avoid buying unnecessary items.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的句型和时态，避免重复表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me focus on my tasks. Moreover, it reduces my stress since I can clearly see what needs to be done.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误（leads应为lists），语法和表达不够准确。建议注意词汇准确性，使用完整句子，并提供更具体的理由。

例: Some people might dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time, and they believe their memory is good enough to remember tasks without writing them down.

提案: 回答缺少主语，语法不完整，表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子，注意语法结构，并解释原因。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better. Also, I enjoy the feeling of physically crossing off completed tasks.

× Yes, I make a list when I was shop because it helped me to remember the things what I need to do and umm it helps me to spend less money because I make a list.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember the things that I need to do and umm it helps me to spend less money because I make a list.

句中使用了过去时态 'was shop'，但描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'shop'。此外，'helped' 应改为 'helps'，保持时态一致。

× Yes, I make a list when I was shop because it helped me to remember the things what I need to do and umm it helps me to spend less money because I make a list.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me to remember the things that I need to do and umm it helps me to spend less money because I make a list.

关系代词 'what' 用于指代 'things' 不正确，应使用 'that' 或 'which'。

× Yes I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me to focus the things what I need to do and when I make a list it feels like I feel less stressed.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me to focus on the things that I need to do and when I make a list, I feel less stressed.

动词 'focus' 后应加介词 'on'，且 'what' 应改为 'that'。'it feels like I feel less stressed' 结构重复，应简化为 'I feel less stressed'。

× Yes I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me to focus the things what I need to do and when I make a list it feels like I feel less stressed.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me to focus on the things that I need to do and when I make a list, I feel less stressed.

关系代词 'what' 用于指代 'things' 不正确，应使用 'that' 或 'which'。

× Maybe some people don't like making leads because they think it spend too much time and they believe they can remember the things what they need to do, Yeah.

✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists because they think it spends too much time and they believe they can remember the things that they need to do, yeah.

'leads' 应为 'lists'，'it spend' 主谓不一致，应为 'it spends'。'what' 用于指代 'things' 不正确，应改为 'that'。

× Maybe some people don't like making leads because they think it spend too much time and they believe they can remember the things what they need to do, Yeah.

✓ Maybe some people don't like making lists because they think it spends too much time and they believe they can remember the things that they need to do, yeah.

主语 'it' 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，故 'spend' 应改为 'spends'。

× Prefer to make a list on paper because it makes me to remember deeply and I'm feeling good when I make a list on the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me to remember more deeply and I feel good when I make a list on paper.

缺少主语 'I'。'makes me to remember' 结构错误，应为 'helps me to remember'。'I'm feeling good' 一般描述感受用一般现在时 'I feel good'。'on the paper' 中 'the' 不必要，应去掉。