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会話

Part 1

試験官

Do you make a list when you shop?

受験者

Well it depends. For some special sale online festivals I usually list what I need like clothes or skin care to avoid overspending. But for groceries I always grab them from street markets when I notice that we are out of them.

試験官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

受験者

Yes, I often list tasks for me and my team every day. It keeps us on track. Like yesterday I had to finish a report by 5:00 PM and the list saved me from last minute stress. It make us stay organized and productive.

試験官

Why don't some people like making lists?

受験者

I think 2 main reasons. First, lists can be so strict for them that they can't act spontaneously and then if they don't finish everything on lists, they might feel frustrated and consider list making pointless.

試験官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

受験者

I use my phone for weekly plan but for daily tasks I usually write them on the notes and then stick notes on my laptop. Like today's task. Buy cat food, call mom and send report.

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総合

総合: 6.5流暢さと一貫性: 7.0発音: 6.5文法: 6.5語彙: 6.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

スコア: 85.0

提案: 你的回答较为自然且内容丰富,但句子结构稍显复杂,部分表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构,避免冗长,同时使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

: It depends on the situation. For special online sales, I usually make a list of items like clothes or skincare to avoid overspending. However, for groceries, I tend to buy them spontaneously from street markets when I realize we have run out.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

スコア: 80.0

提案: 回答内容具体且有例子,但存在语法错误(如“It make us”应为“It makes us”),且句子衔接略显生硬。建议注意主谓一致,使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

: Yes, I often make a list of tasks for myself and my team every day because it helps us stay on track. For example, yesterday I had to finish a report by 5:00 PM, and the list saved me from last-minute stress. Therefore, it makes us more organized and productive.

Why don't some people like making lists?

スコア: 75.0

提案: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不够完整,且缺少连接词导致逻辑不够清晰。建议使用完整句子并添加连接词,使表达更自然流畅。

: I think there are two main reasons. First, lists can be too strict, which prevents people from acting spontaneously. Second, if they don't complete everything on the list, they may feel frustrated and think that making lists is pointless.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

スコア: 78.0

提案: 回答内容具体,但句子较为零散,缺少连接词,且部分表达不够完整。建议使用完整句子并添加连接词,使表达更连贯。

: I use my phone to make weekly plans, but for daily tasks, I usually write them on sticky notes and stick them on my laptop. For example, today's tasks include buying cat food, calling my mom, and sending a report.

文法

Singular and plural issue

× I think 2 main reasons.

I think 2 main reasons.

句子缺少谓语动词,应该是“I think there are 2 main reasons.”,这里涉及到“there be”结构和主谓一致问题。

Singular and plural issue

× I think 2 main reasons.

I think there are 2 main reasons.

“2 main reasons”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,且缺少“there”引导存在句。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× It make us stay organized and productive.

It makes us stay organized and productive.

主语“It”是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,改为“makes”。

重要語彙

SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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