List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons or examples.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and saves both time and money. For instance, last week I avoided buying unnecessary items by sticking to my list.

提案: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise language. Avoid repetition and use linking words to explain how making a list helps your work. Provide specific details about your routine.

例: Yes, I create a daily work schedule which helps me organise my tasks efficiently. For example, by planning my day in advance, I can prioritise important projects and meet deadlines more easily.

提案: Your answer is understandable but lacks clarity and natural phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain reasons more clearly. Try to avoid grammatical errors and be more specific.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes time that could be better spent working. However, I think lists actually help improve productivity by organising tasks.

提案: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific advantages of using phone apps for lists.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because digital apps offer useful features like notifications and reminders, which help me stay organised and complete tasks on time.

× Yeah, of course I make a list when I go for shopping.

✓ Yeah, of course I make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for'. 'Go' is followed directly by the gerund form of the verb to indicate the activity.

× And because when you make a list, you can remind when what you want and you can save your time or save your money and everything you.

✓ Because when you make a list, you can remember what you want and save your time and money.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Remind when what you want' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'remember' and the phrase should be 'remember what you want'. Also, 'save your time or save your money and everything you' is awkward; it should be 'save your time and money'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I make a list for my work and definitely it works and I make a schedule for my daily routine.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it definitely works, and I make a schedule for my daily routine.

The original sentence is mostly correct but needs a comma before 'and' to separate independent clauses for clarity.

× Then I go to office and make a schedule and I know it what what I do what my routine for my day and definitely works.

✓ Then I go to the office and make a schedule, so I know what I have to do in my daily routine, and it definitely works.

The original sentence has multiple issues: missing article 'the' before 'office', repetition 'what what', and unclear phrasing. The corrected sentence adds 'the' before 'office', removes repetition, and clarifies the meaning with proper conjunctions and structure.

× Because they think that time they spend on making list, they can spend instead of they can spend their time on work.

✓ Because they think that the time they spend making a list could be better spent working.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Time they spend on making list' should be 'the time they spend making a list'. The phrase 'they can spend instead of they can spend their time on work' is confusing; it is simplified to 'could be better spent working' for clarity and correctness.

× They can improve their work instead of making list.

✓ They can improve their work instead of making a list.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' here. Also, 'making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'.

× In my point of view on my phone is better because the digital app is they give me they give they give you also option for notification and a reminder and when you ever do something.

✓ In my point of view, using my phone is better because the digital apps give me options for notifications and reminders whenever I do something.

The phrase 'In my point of view on my phone is better' is incorrect; it should be 'In my point of view, using my phone is better'. 'The digital app is they give me they give they give you also option' is ungrammatical and repetitive; corrected to 'digital apps give me options'. 'Option for notification and a reminder' should be plural 'options for notifications and reminders'. 'When you ever do something' should be 'whenever I do something' for clarity and correctness.