List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ ("the the"). Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể ngắn gọn hơn để hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything important.

提案: Bạn có ý trả lời đúng nhưng có lỗi từ vựng ("toxins" không phù hợp) và cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

例: Yes, I make a list for my schoolwork because I have many assignments to complete. Making a list helps me organize my tasks and manage my time better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu "some people find it may be made to discuss things" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn và dùng câu đơn giản, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or they are too lazy to do it.

提案: Bạn có ý trả lời rõ ràng nhưng câu cuối cùng hơi lủng củng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi như "bringing like any other stops with myself".

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can carry it with me everywhere without needing extra things.

× The the importance of the list when shopping is undeniable.

✓ The importance of the list when shopping is undeniable.

There is a repetition of the definite article 'the'. Only one 'the' is needed before 'importance'. This is a common article error where the article is unnecessarily repeated.

× It helps us to remind of the things and categories of food that we need to buy, not to forget or miss anything.

✓ It helps us to remember the things and categories of food that we need to buy, so we don't forget or miss anything.

The verb 'remind' is incorrectly used here; 'remind' requires an object and a person to be reminded. The correct verb is 'remember'. Also, the phrase 'not to forget or miss anything' is better expressed as 'so we don't forget or miss anything' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× there are many toxins and homework that we need I have to complete.

✓ there are many tasks and homework that I have to complete.

The word 'toxins' is incorrect in this context; likely a mishearing or typo for 'tasks'. Also, 'we need I have to complete' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I have to complete' to match the subject. 'Homework' is uncountable, so 'many' is not appropriate; 'tasks' is countable and fits better here.

× Otherwise some people find it may be made to discuss things.

✓ Otherwise, some people find it may cause arguments.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'May be made to discuss things' is incorrect. The intended meaning seems to be that making lists may lead to discussions or arguments. 'May cause arguments' is a clearer and grammatically correct expression. Also, a comma is needed after 'Otherwise'.

× Personally, I prefer making a list on my phones because it is much more convenient and it can go with me everywhere without bringing like any other stops with myself.

✓ Personally, I prefer making a list on my phone because it is much more convenient and I can take it with me everywhere without carrying any other items.

The plural 'phones' is incorrect; it should be singular 'phone'. The phrase 'it can go with me everywhere' is awkward; 'I can take it with me everywhere' is better. 'Without bringing like any other stops with myself' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'without carrying any other items' to convey the intended meaning clearly.