List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整，但句子结构稍显复杂，且部分表达不够准确，如“whatever catch my eyes”应为“whatever catches my eye”。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用更准确的表达。

例: It depends on what I need to buy and where I shop. If I have specific items in mind, I make a list to avoid forgetting them. However, if I just browse the supermarket, I buy whatever catches my eye.

提案: 回答内容清晰且结构合理，但有小的语法错误，如“make A to do list”应为“make a to-do list”。建议注意冠词使用和连字符的正确写法，同时可以增加一些连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Definitely. I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and reminds me of deadlines. This improves my productivity and boosts my self-discipline.

提案: 回答表达有些断裂，如“Mentally.”单独成句不自然。建议将句子连贯起来，避免断句，且用词更准确。可以增加具体例子或原因使内容更丰富。

例: Well, from my perspective, it depends on people's personality and the task's importance. If the task is not very important, people might prefer to remember it mentally because making a list seems unnecessary.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，存在语法和拼写错误，如“plain stone”应为“plain stone”可能是拼写错误，且句子未完成。建议练习完整表达，注意拼写和语法，确保句子通顺且完整。

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me organize my tasks and gives me a sense of control. It also helps me remember better than using my phone.

× If I just wander around the supermarket I will buy whatever catch my eyes.

✓ If I just wander around the supermarket I will buy whatever catches my eyes.

动词catch在这里作为第三人称单数主语的谓语动词，需加-s变为catches，表示主谓一致。

× I always make A to do list for my work.

✓ I always make a to-do list for my work.

英文中不定冠词a应为小写，且to do list应写作to-do list，表示“待办事项清单”。

× Well, I prefer making a list on paper writing my plain stone can help me organize what I should do and boast a sense of control myself and writing it down can not only.

✓ Well, I prefer making a list on paper. Writing my plan down can help me organize what I should do and boost a sense of control over myself, and writing it down can not only...

原句中“writing my plain stone”应为“writing my plan down”，表达“写下我的计划”；boast应为boost，意为“提升”；句子结构混乱，需分句并调整词序，使表达清晰。