List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks proper sentence structure. Try to respond directly to the question with a complete sentence and provide specific details about your shopping list habits. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop to remember the items I need, such as T-shirts and shoes from Pantaloon.

提案: Your answer is hesitant and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain why you do or do not make lists for work, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: No, I don't make a list for my work because as a doctor, my tasks vary daily and are unpredictable.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear reason why some people dislike making lists, and support it with specific details or examples.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them boring and prefer to remember things naturally.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use complete sentences and correct grammar, and provide more specific reasons for your preference.

例: I prefer to make my lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me.

× I need shop.

✓ I need to shop.

The sentence is missing the infinitive marker 'to' after 'need'. In English, when 'need' is followed by a verb, it usually requires 'to' before the verb. So, 'I need shop' should be corrected to 'I need to shop'. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.

× I need to shop close Pantaloon T-shirt shoes.

✓ I need to shop close to Pantaloon for T-shirts and shoes.

The original sentence lacks prepositions and conjunctions to connect ideas properly. 'Close' should be followed by 'to' to indicate proximity. Also, 'Pantaloon T-shirt shoes' is unclear; it likely means shopping for T-shirts and shoes near Pantaloon. Adding 'for' and separating items with 'and' clarifies meaning.

× I am doctor, umm, I, I don't know.

✓ I am a doctor, umm, I, I don't know.

In English, singular countable nouns like 'doctor' require an article. The sentence misses the indefinite article 'a' before 'doctor'. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct: 'I am a doctor'.

× Because don't remember our working element and our days. Drop.

✓ Because we don't remember our work schedule and our days are busy.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a subject before 'don't remember' and uses unclear phrases like 'working element' and 'Drop'. Replacing 'working element' with 'work schedule' and clarifying the sentence structure improves comprehension.

× I prefer ma make my list my phone because it is simple and my phone are only me.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my phone because it is simple and my phone is only for me.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'ma make' should be 'to make' (infinitive form), missing preposition 'on' before 'my phone', and subject-verb agreement error 'my phone are' should be 'my phone is'. Also, 'my phone are only me' is unclear; corrected to 'my phone is only for me' to express exclusivity.