List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Well, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping for everyday items. However, I only make a list when I have to prepare for a specific event, like a birthday party or the family gathering, because I want to make sure I don't forget anything important.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, of course I I have to make a list for my work because, uh, within a day I have thousands of tasks that I need to umm, complete. So for to have the good organizations and make sure that I not miss any important task I I will make.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think some people don't like making lists because they consider it unnecessary and waste of time. For example, they might feel confident in managing their task mentally and prefer to organize their day without writing things down.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Ah, actually it depends. But for my preference, I umm, I'd like to make a list on paper. I'd like to write things down because when I write thing down, this will help me to remember things better and make me, uh, organize it by the way that I want to.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 85.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh dùng các từ như "well" và "only" quá nhiều để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn. Bạn cũng có thể thêm một câu ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm rõ lý do bạn làm danh sách cho các sự kiện đặc biệt.
例: I usually don't make a list for daily shopping, but when preparing for events like birthday parties, I make a detailed list to ensure I buy all necessary items, such as decorations and gifts.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh", "umm" để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý, ví dụ như "because" hoặc "so that".
例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many tasks each day, so making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss any important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 90.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn đã rõ ràng và có ví dụ minh họa, tuy nhiên bạn có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối như "for instance" hoặc "therefore" để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
例: Some people dislike making lists because they see it as unnecessary and time-consuming. For instance, they may trust their memory and prefer to plan their day mentally rather than writing things down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 75.0提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ như "ah", "umm", "uh" để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chuyên nghiệp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng các liên từ như "because" để giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn thích viết trên giấy.
例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better and allows me to organize the list in a way that suits me.
文法
× within a day I have thousands of tasks that I need to umm, complete
✓ within a day I have thousands of tasks that I need to umm, complete
No correction needed here as 'thousands of tasks' is correctly plural and matches the context.
× So for to have the good organizations and make sure that I not miss any important task I I will make.
✓ So to have good organization and make sure that I do not miss any important task, I will make one.
The phrase 'for to have' is incorrect; it should be 'to have'. 'Organizations' should be singular 'organization' as it refers to the concept. Also, 'I not miss' is missing the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in present tense. Added 'one' to clarify the object of 'make'.
× I'd like to write things down because when I write thing down, this will help me to remember things better and make me, uh, organize it by the way that I want to.
✓ I'd like to write things down because when I write things down, this helps me remember things better and helps me organize them the way I want to.
The singular 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. 'Make me, uh, organize it' is awkward; better to say 'helps me organize them'. Also, 'this will help' is better as 'this helps' for habitual action.
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