List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I make a list when I shop. I am quite forgetful, so I like to write down everything in my notes up before I go out and then plan my route of the shops according to the list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I make a list for my work. I like to write down all my tasks so I don't mean anything out and complete them according to the deadlines. It helps me be more organized and complete everything in a timely manner.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I think that some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time and because they can memorize everything they need to do so they don't think it's necessary to write it all down.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I like both options. If I have a pen and a paper on hand, I like to write it all down, but if I don't have them, I can write them down in my phone and later just delete it instead of tossing the paper.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 85.0提案: Try to avoid minor grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "write down everything in my notes up" is awkward; instead, say "write everything down in my notes." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things easily. Therefore, I write everything down in my notes before going out, and then I plan my shopping route according to the list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 75.0提案: There is a mistake in "I don't mean anything out" which should be "I don't miss anything." Also, try to use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas and improve coherence.
例: Yes, I make a list for my work because I don't want to miss any tasks. Therefore, I complete them according to their deadlines, which helps me stay organized and finish everything on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 80.0提案: Try to use linking words such as "because" and "so" more effectively to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating "because" twice in one sentence; instead, restructure for clarity.
例: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it's a waste of time and can memorize their tasks, so they don't find it necessary to write them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 85.0提案: Use linking words like "however" or "otherwise" to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating "I like" twice; try to vary sentence structure for naturalness.
例: I like both options; if I have a pen and paper on hand, I write everything down, but otherwise, I use my phone to make the list and delete it later instead of throwing away paper.
文法
× I like to write down all my tasks so I don't mean anything out and complete them according to the deadlines.
✓ I like to write down all my tasks so I don't miss anything and complete them according to the deadlines.
The phrase 'don't mean anything out' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'don't miss anything'. The verb 'miss' is the correct choice here to express not forgetting or overlooking tasks. This is a past tense issue because the phrase is incorrectly formed and does not convey the intended past or present perfect meaning.
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