List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'because it because it' and use simpler, clearer sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I can easily check the list and buy all the items I want without forgetting anything.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical mistakes like 'more easier' and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct grammar and add linking words to improve flow.

例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it makes things easier and helps me manage my time efficiently. Therefore, I prefer to prepare a list before starting any task.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Avoid double negatives and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to clarify your points.

例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a sharp memory and can remember things easily. On the other hand, people who find it hard to remember prefer to make lists to help them.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors like 'very easier' and awkward expressions. Use correct grammar and more natural phrases. Also, try to avoid vague statements like 'people can be left behind'.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easier to carry than paper. Since I always have my phone with me, I can check my list anytime without worrying about losing it.

× Yes, I think making a list is very essential when we go to shopping because it because it makes our things easier to remember.

✓ Yes, I think making a list is very essential when we go shopping because it makes it easier to remember our things.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'because it because it' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'because it'. The sentence structure is improved by placing 'easier to remember our things' at the end for clarity.

× We can just open our list and we can buy anything which we wanted at that particular time.

✓ We can just open our list and buy anything which we want at that particular time.

The verb 'wanted' is in past tense, but the context requires present tense 'want' because the action is happening now. Also, 'we can' is repeated unnecessarily; it is better to say 'we can just open our list and buy'. The relative pronoun 'which' is acceptable but 'that' would be more natural.

× Making list for my work makes my work more easier, I can be more time efficient and I can manage my work related to anything by my time.

✓ Making a list for my work makes my work easier; I can be more time efficient and manage my work according to my time.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' should be removed. The sentence is long and can be split with a semicolon for clarity. 'Manage my work related to anything by my time' is awkward; 'manage my work according to my time' is clearer.

× I don't know about others perspective but if I have to tell one I can say people don't like to make lists because they have good and sharp memory.

✓ I don't know about others' perspectives but if I have to mention one, I can say people don't like to make lists because they have good and sharp memories.

The possessive form 'others' should be 'others'' to indicate possession. 'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' because it refers to multiple people. 'If I have to tell one' is awkward; 'if I have to mention one' is better. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' as it refers to multiple people.

× I can say some people don't are not good in revising things so they have to make list but people who have sharp memories doesn't need it.

✓ I can say some people are not good at revising things so they have to make lists, but people who have sharp memories don't need it.

The phrase 'don't are not' is incorrect; it should be 'are not'. The preposition 'in' should be 'at' after 'good'. 'Make list' requires plural 'lists' or 'make a list'. 'Doesn't' should be 'don't' to agree with plural subject 'people'.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because I think it is very easier to carry a phone with us.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is much easier to carry a phone with us.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a'. 'Very easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is comparative and should be modified by 'much' or 'a lot' instead of 'very'.

× People can be left behind but phone cannot be.

✓ People can be left behind but a phone cannot be.

The noun 'phone' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Without the article, the sentence is incomplete.

× Phone is something which is with us every time.

✓ A phone is something which is with us all the time.

The noun 'Phone' needs an article 'A' at the beginning. 'Every time' is better expressed as 'all the time' in this context for naturalness.