List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Well, it depends. Sometimes maybe I just need two or three things. I will keep it in my mind and just grab them in the shopping mall. But when you know, especially about when you go to university or to a new environment, I will make a list.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Absolutely, I will make a list for my work. I still remember when I was an English tutor, especially in, you know, in a meeting and the leader will told us many important lists and uh, I am afraid of forgetting. So I tend to make a list to prioritize these items and it could keep keep.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they feel overwhelmed by so many tasks to complete. They prefer to keep everything simple and not write everything down. They will feel realized if they don't have to handle so many tasks and responsibilities.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
Well, it, it depends on situations, you know, if sometimes I would get away from the electronic devices, I tend to write things on on paper and I love the feeling of writing things with a pen. But sometimes if I want to have a balance.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答时语言稍显不自然，表达有些重复和不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。
例: It depends on the situation. If I only need a few items, I usually remember them and pick them up directly. However, when I move to a new place like university, I prefer to make a list to stay organized.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态和语法的正确使用，避免口语填充词，增强表达的逻辑性。
例: Yes, I always make lists for my work. For example, when I was an English tutor, I would write down important tasks from meetings to avoid forgetting them and to prioritize effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答内容较好，但最后一句表达不够准确，建议使用更恰当的词汇表达感受，并增加连接词使逻辑更清晰。
例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed by numerous tasks. They prefer simplicity and avoid writing everything down, which helps them feel more relaxed and less stressed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答不完整且有重复，表达不够连贯。建议完整回答问题，避免重复词汇，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
例: It depends on the situation. When I want to avoid electronic devices, I prefer writing lists on paper because I enjoy using a pen. However, sometimes I use my phone for convenience and balance.
文法
× the leader will told us many important lists
✓ the leader told us many important lists
这里使用了将来时态助动词 'will' 和过去式动词 'told'，这是时态混用错误。正确的表达应该是过去时态 'told'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。建议去掉 'will'，直接用过去式 'told'。
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