List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 質問に直接答えていないため、まずは「はい」か「いいえ」で答え、その後に理由を述べると良いです。また、文法的な誤りを直し、自然な表現を使いましょう。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I have a good memory and can remember what I need to buy.

提案: 質問の意図を理解し、まず自分の状況を説明した後、関連する情報を整理して話すと良いです。文法の誤りを減らし、接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

例: Actually, I am a student, so I don't make lists for work. However, I often create a study schedule, which helps me study more effectively.

提案: 質問に対して答えが不明瞭で、意味が通じにくいです。まず理由を明確に述べ、その後具体例や説明を加えると良いでしょう。文法と語彙の改善も必要です。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. They prefer to remember tasks mentally instead.

提案: 理由が少し曖昧で、表現も不自然です。好みをはっきり述べ、その理由を具体的に説明し、文法を正しく使いましょう。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's easy and convenient to check my schedule anytime.

× No idea because of my memory ability is great so I don't need to take a note.

✓ No idea because my memory ability is great, so I don't need to take a note.

The phrase 'because of' is incorrectly used here. 'Because of' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase, but 'my memory ability is great' is a clause. The correct usage is 'because' followed by a clause. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.

× In fact, I'm not worker, I'm student, so I do not make a list for my work, but I often make a study schedule.

✓ In fact, I'm not a worker, I'm a student, so I do not make a list for my work, but I often make a study schedule.

The nouns 'worker' and 'student' require the indefinite article 'a' because they are singular countable nouns. Omitting the article is incorrect.

× So yeah, it is very effective to study.

✓ So yeah, it is very effective for studying.

The phrase 'effective to study' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'for' followed by the gerund form 'studying' to indicate purpose or suitability.

× Songs to make a list.

✓ Some people don't like to make a list.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb, making it a sentence fragment. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject and verb to express the intended meaning.

× It will be very clearly to clearly for what should I do and what will you do next?

✓ It will be very clear what I should do and what you will do next.

'Clearly' is an adverb, but the sentence requires the adjective 'clear' to describe 'it'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect; the corrected version uses proper word order and removes unnecessary words.

× So and some many people make list.

✓ Also, many people make lists.

'Some many' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'many'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'many people'. The sentence is also rephrased for clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on phone because I always have fun, so I can do make this easily and it is convenient to check my list on a time schedule.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can make it easily and it is convenient to check my list according to my schedule.

The preposition 'on phone' is incomplete; it should be 'on my phone'. The phrase 'have fun' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'have it with me'. 'Do make' is redundant; 'make' suffices. 'On a time schedule' is awkward; 'according to my schedule' is clearer.