Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I do do my homework.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
I don't know.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make this on the paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 40.0提案: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和连贯性。建议在回答时提供更多具体信息,并使用连接词使回答更自然流畅。
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 30.0提案: 回答不符合问题,内容混乱且缺乏逻辑。建议直接回答是否制作工作清单,并说明其效果,同时避免重复和语法错误。
例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 20.0提案: 回答过于简短且没有尝试解释或推测。建议尝试给出理由或观点,丰富内容并使用连接词。
例: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 50.0提案: 回答基本清楚,但表达不够自然,且缺少具体原因。建议说明偏好原因,并使用更自然的表达方式。
例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to see everything at once and I enjoy writing by hand.
× Yes, I do do my homework.
✓ Yes, I do my homework.
这里的错误是动词重复使用了“do do”,正确的表达应该是“I do my homework”。这是一个过去时态问题,因为回答应该用一般现在时态表达习惯动作,去掉多余的“do”即可。
× I prefer to make this on the paper.
✓ I prefer to make this on paper.
这里错误地使用了定冠词“the”,在表达“在纸上”时,通常不加冠词,直接用“on paper”。因此应去掉“the”,改为“on paper”。