List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简单，缺乏细节和连贯性。建议在回答时增加具体细节，如列举购物清单的好处，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

提案: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，内容重复。建议简化句子结构，明确表达原因，并避免重复。

例: I don't make lists for my work because I have many tasks throughout the day, so it's hard to list them all.

提案: 回答过于笼统，缺乏具体理由和细节。建议给出具体原因，并用连接词丰富内容。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously and find lists restrictive.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议完整表达偏好并说明原因，使用连贯的句子。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because Siri helps me add items quickly and easily.

× Yes, I will make a list when I'm shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop.

这里的回答是针对习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是将来时。将来时表示未来的动作，不符合问题的语境。

× I will not make a list for my job because it is really really more jobs in the whole day.

✓ I do not make a list for my job because I have many tasks throughout the day.

这里描述的是习惯性行为，应该用一般现在时。'will not make'表示将来不做，语境不符。

× it is really really more jobs in the whole day.

✓ there are really many jobs throughout the whole day.

jobs是复数，前面用it is不合适，应该用there are来表示复数存在。

× So I I will not, I won't make legs.

✓ So I do not make lists.

这里描述的是习惯性行为，应该用一般现在时。'will not'表示将来不做，且legs拼写错误，应为lists。

× I think people are different so they have a right to not make a list to work.

✓ I think people are different, so they have the right not to make a list for work.

短语中'right to not make'应改为'the right not to make'，且'for work'比'to work'更合适。

× I prefer to make on my because Siri is really, really useful.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because Siri is really useful.

句中缺少名词'phone'，导致句子不完整，且'really, really'重复，简化为'really'更自然。