ListPart 1 採点レポート

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会話

Part 1

試験官

Do you make a list when you shop?

受験者

No, I prefer to shop whatever I see.

試験官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

受験者

Yes, I usually make a list for my work everyday 'cause I am afraid to forget some important things and it really works for me.

試験官

Why don't some people like making lists?

受験者

Some people doesn't like making lists because they just find it restrictive and prefer a more independent life of working and shopping. For example attic.

試験官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

受験者

I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or remove items everywhere without worrying about losing the paper. Also, using my phone helps me stay organized since I always have it with me.

評価

総合

総合: 6.0流暢さと一貫性: 6.5発音: 6.0文法: 5.5語彙: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

スコア: 65.0

提案: 回答不够完整,缺少具体原因和细节,表达略显简单。建议在回答时直接回应问题并补充原因或例子,使回答更自然流畅。

: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I like to browse freely and buy things that catch my eye. This way, I can discover new products and enjoy the shopping experience more.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

スコア: 80.0

提案: 回答较好,表达了原因和效果,但语言稍显口语化,且句子结构可以更丰富。建议使用更正式的表达,并适当使用连接词。

: Yes, I usually make a list for my work every day because I am afraid of forgetting important tasks. It really helps me stay organized and ensures that I complete everything on time.

Why don't some people like making lists?

スコア: 50.0

提案: 语法错误明显(主谓不一致),表达不清晰,例子不相关。建议注意语法,提供更具体且相关的例子,增强回答的逻辑性和说服力。

: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and spontaneity. For example, they might prefer to decide what to do on the spot rather than following a fixed plan.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

スコア: 90.0

提案: 回答自然且内容丰富,使用了连接词和具体例子。建议在表达中加入更多高级词汇以提升语言水平。

: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For instance, I can quickly add or remove items anytime and anywhere without the risk of losing a paper list. Moreover, having my phone with me at all times helps me stay organized efficiently.

文法

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Some people doesn't like making lists because they just find it restrictive and prefer a more independent life of working and shopping.

Some people don't like making lists because they just find it restrictive and prefer a more independent life of working and shopping.

主语是复数形式的'some people',谓语动词应使用复数形式'don't',而不是单数形式'doesn't'。这是主谓一致错误。建议记住复数主语搭配复数动词形式。

重要語彙

AfraidFrightened; Reluctant
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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