List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma thulo sentence haru cha ra kunai kunai jagah ma grammar thik chhaina. Tapai le answer lai thulo sentence ma bhanda chhoto ra spashta sentence ma bhannu parcha. Jastai, 'Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me manage my time and stay organized. I always take the list with me to avoid impulsive buying.'

例: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me manage my time and stay organized. I always take the list with me to avoid impulsive buying.

提案: Tapai ko answer ma thulo sentence haru cha ra kunai kunai jagah ma word choice ra grammar thik chhaina. Tapai le answer lai thulo sentence ma bhanda chhoto ra clear sentence ma bhannu parcha. Jastai, 'Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and organized. This way, I can finish tasks before deadlines and make a good impression.'

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and organized. This way, I can finish tasks before deadlines and make a good impression.

提案: Tapai ko answer ma thulo sentence haru cha ra kunai kunai jagah ma grammar ra word choice thik chhaina. Tapai le answer lai chhoto ra clear sentence ma bhannu parcha ra linking words ko prayog garnu parcha. Jastai, 'Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer spontaneous decisions. However, I would suggest making lists as it makes work easier and faster.'

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer spontaneous decisions. However, I would suggest making lists as it makes work easier and faster.

提案: Tapai ko answer ma thulo sentence haru cha ra kunai kunai jagah ma grammar ra word choice thik chhaina. Tapai le answer lai chhoto ra clear sentence ma bhannu parcha ra linking words ko prayog garnu parcha. Jastai, 'I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because phones can run out of battery. For example, if my phone dies in a store, I cannot check my list.'

例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because phones can run out of battery. For example, if my phone dies in a store, I cannot check my list.

× I make the list when I saw it has to manage my time and keeps me organized and focused.

✓ I make the list when I see I have to manage my time and keep myself organized and focused.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'saw' (past tense) where present tense 'see' is needed to match the habitual action. Also, 'keeps' should be 'keep' to agree with the subject 'I'. Use present tense for habitual actions.

× Whenever I go to shopping, I take that list with me and I focus on those things that I planned at home to buy.

✓ Whenever I go shopping, I take that list with me and focus on the things I planned to buy at home.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'to'. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× It prevent me from impulsive decisions.

✓ It prevents me from impulsive decisions.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'prevents' (third person singular) to agree with the subject.

× It helps me to stay focused and organize.

✓ It helps me to stay focused and organized.

The word 'organize' is a verb, but here an adjective 'organized' is needed to describe the state of the subject.

× That way I can complete my time before deadline on a priority basis.

✓ That way I can complete my work before the deadline on a priority basis.

The phrase 'complete my time' is incorrect; it should be 'complete my work'. Also, 'the deadline' needs the definite article 'the'.

× It helps to make a good impression of me on others.

✓ It helps to make a good impression on others about me.

The phrase 'impression of me on others' is awkward; the correct preposition is 'impression on others' and 'about me' clarifies the meaning.

× I think some people don't like making this because they find it restrictive and they like to take impulsive or spontaneous decision.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and like to make impulsive or spontaneous decisions.

'Making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer. Also, 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' to match 'impulsive or spontaneous'.

× That could be the reason for them not making this.

✓ That could be the reason why they don't make lists.

The phrase 'reason for them not making this' is awkward; 'reason why they don't make lists' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× But if I get chance to suggest, I would always suggest them to make list which makes their work easier and faster.

✓ But if I get a chance to suggest, I would always suggest to them to make lists which make their work easier and faster.

Added article 'a' before 'chance'. 'Suggest them to make list' is incorrect; correct form is 'suggest to them to make lists'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match 'their work'.

× I always prefer to make the list on paper rather than on my phone because talking about phone, it can be dead anytime and when I am in a store and my phone is dead I cannot decide what to buy.

✓ I always prefer to make the list on paper rather than on my phone because, speaking about phones, they can die anytime, and when I am in a store and my phone is dead, I cannot decide what to buy.

'Talking about phone' is incorrect; 'speaking about phones' is better. 'It can be dead' is informal; 'they can die' is more appropriate. Added commas for clarity.

× So I prefer paper anytime always.

✓ So I always prefer paper anytime.

The adverbs 'anytime' and 'always' are misplaced; 'always' should come before the verb 'prefer' for correct adverb placement.