List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I find it convenient to make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid impulsive decisions, saving time and money."

例: I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid buying things I don't need. This way, I save both time and money, and shopping becomes more enjoyable.

提案: Your answer has some unclear words and grammar mistakes. Use correct vocabulary and clearer structure. For example, replace "rag" with "work" or "tasks" and say "I make a list to prioritize my work, which helps me finish tasks before the deadline."

例: Yes, I make a list for my work. When I have a busy day, the list helps me prioritize tasks so I can complete everything before the deadline.

提案: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has grammar errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating the same phrase. For example, say "Some people avoid making lists because they think it's unnecessary, even if they often forget things."

例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it's not necessary, even though it can help them remember important things. However, I always make a list when I go shopping.

提案: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Avoid starting with "Or your phone." Also, explain your preference clearly. For example, say "I prefer making lists on paper because it's easy to carry and helps me make decisions while shopping."

例: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone because paper is easy to carry everywhere. This helps me make better decisions when I shop.

× If I make a list, when I stop I find it convenient rather than not making any lease.

✓ If I make a list when I shop, I find it more convenient than not making any list.

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; it should be 'list'. Also, 'any lease' is incorrect quantifier usage; 'any list' or 'no list' is appropriate. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× It helps me to prevent from making impulsive decision which has to save my time and money.

✓ It helps me prevent making impulsive decisions, which saves my time and money.

The phrase 'prevent from making' is incorrect; 'prevent making' is correct. Also, 'impulsive decision' should be plural 'impulsive decisions' to match the context. 'Has to save' is incorrect; 'saves' is appropriate here.

× Yes, I made a list for my rag.

✓ Yes, I made a list for my work.

The word 'rag' is incorrect; it should be 'work'. This is likely a typo or mispronunciation.

× I think some people don't like making list regardless of their tendency to forget things because they believe it is unnecessary.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists regardless of their tendency to forget things because they believe it is unnecessary.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity of making lists.

× But I prefer to make list anytime I go for shop.

✓ But I prefer to make a list anytime I go shopping.

The noun 'list' needs an article 'a' here. Also, 'go for shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× Or your phone. I prefer to make a list in paper rather than on my phone.

✓ On paper. I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone.

The phrase 'in paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. Also, the sentence fragment 'Or your phone.' is unclear and corrected to 'On paper.' to answer the question properly.

× It is very convenient to carry everywhere we go.

✓ It is very convenient to carry wherever we go.

The phrase 'carry everywhere we go' is awkward; 'carry wherever we go' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× Eventually we can buy on a decision.

✓ Eventually, we can make a decision on what to buy.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper sentence structure.