List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "makes my work easier and flexible without any inconvenience" which is a bit awkward. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how the list helps you.

例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For example, I can quickly check off items and avoid forgetting anything important, which makes shopping less stressful.

提案: Your answer has good content but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement for clarity. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, avoid run-on sentences and be more specific about how the list helps reduce workload.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list on my phone or diary during busy days. This helps me prioritize tasks, so I can complete them efficiently and reduce my workload.

提案: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and more natural phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' properly. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'making this' and be more specific. Try to explain reasons with examples.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary or they trust their memory. However, I believe lists make work easier by helping to organize tasks and avoid forgetting important things.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Be careful with sentence structure and word choice. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'Sorry phone' in formal speaking.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more secure and convenient. Unlike paper, which can be easily lost, my phone is always with me, so I can access my list anytime.

× I make schedule on my phone's note or on a paper or my diary according to the importance and I perform all my tasks accordingly and it remove my workload.

✓ I make schedules on my phone's note or on paper or in my diary according to the importance and I perform all my tasks accordingly and it removes my workload.

The word 'schedule' should be plural 'schedules' because it refers to multiple tasks or plans. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here. 'Remove' should be 'removes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Nepali explanation: 'schedule' लाई बहुवचन 'schedules' बनाउनुपर्छ किनभने यहाँ धेरै काम वा योजना जनाइएको छ। 'a paper' गलत छ, किनभने 'paper' यहाँ गणनीय छैन। 'remove' लाई 'removes' बनाउनुपर्छ किनभने 'it' एकवचन छ।

× I think some people don't like making this because they believe making list is unnecessary or extra, or their memory power is good so they're not preferring to make a list.

✓ I think some people don't like making this because they believe making lists is unnecessary or extra, or their memory power is good so they don't prefer to make a list.

'making list' should be 'making lists' to indicate the general act of making lists. 'They're not preferring' is incorrect; the correct form is 'they don't prefer' because 'prefer' is a stative verb and not used in continuous form. Nepali explanation: 'making list' लाई बहुवचन 'making lists' बनाउनुपर्छ किनभने सामान्य क्रियालाई जनाइएको छ। 'They're not preferring' गलत छ, यसको सट्टा 'they don't prefer' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ किनभने 'prefer' स्थिर क्रिया हो र continuous form मा प्रयोग हुँदैन।

× But I believe making this makes work much more easier.

✓ But I believe making this makes work much easier.

The word 'easier' already implies comparison, so 'more' is redundant and incorrect here. Use either 'much easier' or 'more easy' (though 'easier' is preferred). Nepali explanation: 'easier' आफैंमा तुलना जनाउँछ, त्यसैले 'more' थप्नु अनावश्यक र गलत हो। 'much easier' प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× I prefer to make a list on my rather than on a paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

The phrase 'on my' is incomplete; it should be 'on my phone'. Also, 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here and should be used without an article. Nepali explanation: 'on my' अपूर्ण छ, 'on my phone' हुनुपर्छ। 'on a paper' गलत छ किनभने 'paper' यहाँ गणनीय छैन, त्यसैले article बिना प्रयोग गर्नुपर्छ।

× I make schedule on my phone's note or on a paper or my diary according to the importance and I perform all my tasks accordingly and it remove my workload.

✓ I make schedules on my phone's note or on paper or in my diary according to the importance and I perform all my tasks accordingly and it removes my workload.

The verb 'remove' should be 'removes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (referring to the list or schedule). Subject-verb agreement is necessary. Nepali explanation: 'remove' लाई 'removes' बनाउनुपर्छ किनभने 'it' एकवचन बिषय हो र क्रियासँग मेल खानुपर्छ।