List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ quan điểm của mình.

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I like to buy things spontaneously. However, this sometimes causes me to forget some items or spend more money than planned. For example, last week I bought extra snacks that I didn't need.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Ngoài ra, hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi "Does it work?" để câu trả lời đầy đủ hơn.

例: Yes, I make a list for my daily routine to organize my studies and free time effectively. It works well because it helps me focus on my homework and balance leisure activities, so I can manage my time better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và phức tạp, nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Bạn cũng nên dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để minh họa ý kiến.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary and annoying. For instance, they may feel stressed if they can't finish all tasks on the list, so they prefer to be flexible with their time.

提案: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng và có lý do hợp lý, nhưng cần chú ý viết câu hoàn chỉnh và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như viết hoa không đúng chỗ.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Also, my phone can send notifications and reminders, which paper lists cannot do, so it helps me stay organized.

× Besides, I find it easier to remember the things I need without writing them down, although sometimes I might forget them or spend more money on.

✓ Besides, I find it easier to remember the things I need without writing them down, although sometimes I might forget them or spend more money.

The phrase 'spend more money on' is incomplete and incorrect here because 'on' requires an object. The correct form is 'spend more money' without 'on' when no object follows. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Unlike going shopping, I do schedule down my daily routine in order to help me organize my studies with my pleasure times.

✓ Unlike going shopping, I do schedule my daily routine in order to help me organize my studies and my leisure time.

The phrase 'schedule down' is incorrect; 'schedule' does not require 'down'. Also, 'pleasure times' is not a standard expression; 'leisure time' is more appropriate. The preposition 'with' is incorrect here and should be replaced with 'and' to connect two nouns properly.

× I'm a student now, so basically I spend most of the day learning new things and doing my homework rather than spending time outdoor.

✓ I'm a student now, so basically I spend most of the day learning new things and doing my homework rather than spending time outdoors.

The word 'outdoor' is an adjective and cannot be used alone as a noun. The correct adverb form is 'outdoors' when referring to spending time outside. This corrects the prepositional usage and word form.

× To answer this question precisely, I think that most people find it a little bit unnecessary and irritating when listing down what they wanted to do because they cannot control all the time they spend on one thing to be more over in another thing.

✓ To answer this question precisely, I think that most people find it a little bit unnecessary and irritating when listing down what they want to do because they cannot control all the time they spend on one thing to avoid spending too much on another thing.

The phrase 'wanted to do' should be in present tense 'want to do' to match the general statement. The phrase 'to be more over in another thing' is incorrect and unclear; it is better expressed as 'to avoid spending too much on another thing' to clarify the intended meaning. Prepositions and verb tenses are corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I would go for making a list on my phone because obviously you carry your mobile everywhere. I don't think a piece of paper when you go to work or to your classes.

✓ I would go for making a list on my phone because obviously you carry your mobile everywhere. I don't think about a piece of paper when you go to work or to your classes.

The sentence 'I don't think a piece of paper...' is incomplete and lacks a verb or preposition. Adding 'about' after 'think' completes the phrase correctly. This fixes the article usage and sentence structure.

× Moreover, A gadget might have notifications or reminders to your schedule running a plain paper.

✓ Moreover, a gadget might have notifications or reminders for your schedule, unlike plain paper.

The phrase 'reminders to your schedule running a plain paper' is incorrect and unclear. The preposition 'to' should be 'for' to indicate purpose. Also, 'running a plain paper' is incorrect; it should be 'unlike plain paper' to contrast gadgets with paper. The conjunction and prepositions are corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.