List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better fluency. For example, instead of repeating 'also' and 'very very much helpful', use more precise expressions. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it saves time and helps me remember important items. Moreover, it allows me to find things quickly without wandering around. For instance, last week, having a list made my shopping much more efficient.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your points. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain reasons clearly. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of my work tasks because it helps me complete them more effectively and saves time. Therefore, I often rely on lists to organize my daily work.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more concise. Avoid repeating ideas and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect your ideas logically.

例: In my opinion, some people avoid making lists because they have good memories and believe that making lists wastes time. So, they prefer to complete their tasks without writing anything down.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'however' and 'because' to explain your preferences. Avoid unnecessary filler words like 'well'.

例: I find both paper and phone lists helpful, depending on the situation. For example, I usually make lists on paper at the office because it helps me organize tasks, but when shopping, I prefer using my phone for convenience.

× Yes, I often make the list when I do shopping because it saves my time.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I do shopping because it saves my time.

The article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'list'. Since this is a general statement about making any list, the indefinite article 'a' should be used instead of the definite article 'the'.

× Moreover, it also helps me to find the things easily without wondering here and there.

✓ Moreover, it also helps me to find the things easily without wandering here and there.

The word 'wondering' is incorrectly used instead of 'wandering'. 'Wandering' means moving around without purpose, which fits the context. 'Wondering' means thinking or being curious, which is incorrect here.

× For example, last time when I was doing shopping, it was very very much helpful.

✓ For example, last time when I was shopping, it was very helpful.

The phrase 'doing shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'shopping'. Also, 'very very much helpful' is awkward; 'very helpful' is the correct expression.

× Yes, usually make the list out of work which I do because it helps me to do the work very effectively and in a time which also saves my time.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of the work I do because it helps me to do the work very effectively and saves my time.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' before 'usually'. The phrase 'make the list out of work which I do' is awkward; 'make a list of the work I do' is correct. Also, 'in a time which also saves my time' is redundant and awkward; 'saves my time' suffices.

× Well in my opinion people do not make the list because some of the people are having good memory and they think that it's a wastage of time.

✓ Well, in my opinion, people do not make lists because some people have good memory and think that it's a waste of time.

The phrase 'are having good memory' is incorrect; 'have good memory' is correct. 'The list' should be plural 'lists' as it refers generally. 'Wastage' is less common; 'waste' is preferred in this context.

× So that's why for not wasting that time as well completing their task in a time they do not make the list.

✓ So that's why, to avoid wasting time and to complete their tasks on time, they do not make lists.

The original sentence is awkward and lacks proper conjunctions. 'For not wasting that time as well completing their task in a time' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'to avoid' and 'and' to connect ideas clearly.

× Well, it is very helpful for me for making a list on the paper as well as on the phone but also it depends on the situation.

✓ Well, it is very helpful for me to make a list on paper as well as on the phone, but it also depends on the situation.

The phrase 'for making a list' should be 'to make a list'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. The sentence is also improved by adding a comma before 'but'.

× When I am in the office I often make the list on the paper because it helps me to prepare and do my task and well when I am in the market I make the list on the phone which help me to easy for shop.

✓ When I am in the office, I often make a list on paper because it helps me to prepare and do my tasks. When I am in the market, I make the list on my phone, which helps me shop easily.

'The list' should be 'a list' for generality. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper'. 'Do my task' should be plural 'do my tasks'. The sentence is run-on and needs to be split. 'Which help me to easy for shop' is incorrect; it should be 'which helps me shop easily'. Also, 'my phone' is more natural than 'the phone'.