List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 구체적인 이유나 경험을 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 하세요.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse and enjoy finding things spontaneously.

提案: 문장이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로 틀렸습니다. 명확한 주제문과 구체적인 설명을 포함하여 문장을 재구성하세요.

例: Yes, I sometimes write a list of tasks I need to complete today, tomorrow, or over the weekend to stay organized.

提案: 답변이 이해하기 어렵고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 명확한 이유를 제시하고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I think some people find making lists difficult because they prefer to work spontaneously without planning.

提案: 문장이 부자연스럽고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 명확한 주제문과 이유를 포함하여 간결하게 답변하세요.

例: I usually use my phone to make lists because it is simple and very convenient.

× No, I usually go to shop and I don't have a list. Just looking and enjoying something.

✓ No, I usually go shopping and I don't have a list. I just look around and enjoy things.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' where 'shopping' is the gerund form used after 'go'. Also, 'Just looking and enjoying something' is a sentence fragment and lacks a subject and verb; it should be 'I just look around and enjoy things' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I sometimes writing list listen is and what I what I have to do today and tomorrow, this weekend and organizer the my my.

✓ Yes, I sometimes write lists to listen to what I have to do today, tomorrow, and this weekend, and organize my tasks.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect verb forms and unclear structure. 'Sometimes writing' should be 'sometimes write' to match the simple present tense. The phrase 'list listen is' is unclear and likely meant to be 'write lists to listen to'. Also, 'organizer the my my' is incorrect; it should be 'organize my tasks'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb usage.

× I think people don't using the list is so tough is and when I do what I do, they people's not thinking.

✓ I think people don't use lists because it is tough, and when I do what I do, they are not thinking.

The phrase 'people don't using' is incorrect; it should be 'people don't use' (simple present tense). 'The list is so tough is' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be 'because it is tough'. 'They people's not thinking' is incorrect pronoun usage; it should be 'they are not thinking'. The sentence needs correction in verb form and pronoun usage for clarity.

× I usually using the my phone list is very simple and very convenient.

✓ I usually use my phone to make lists because it is very simple and very convenient.

The phrase 'I usually using' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually use' (simple present tense). Also, 'the my phone list is very simple' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my phone to make lists because it is very simple'. The sentence needs correction in verb form and sentence structure for clarity.