List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because I often forget important things so I have to make a list and if I don't make a list I I can't remember the what I have.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I make a list for my work and when I can't remember something I I I can check the list and yeah, I think it is very useful for me.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Some people don't like making lists because they find writing them by hand time consuming. Recently, many prefer typing lists on their phones because it is faster and more convenient. This trend has gradually become more popular as technology advances.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I prefer to make a list on my phone because umm I always have phone so I can check anytime. But if I make a list on paper, if I forgot this that paper I can see check it.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 65.0提案: この回答は内容が少し繰り返されており、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、繰り返しを避け、明確なトピック文と具体的な理由を一文で述べ、その後に詳細を加える練習をしましょう。
例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget important items. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk when I didn't have a list, so now I find lists very helpful.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答に繰り返しが多く、話が少し不明瞭です。より効果的に伝えるために、簡潔で明確な文を使い、接続詞を用いて理由や効果を説明しましょう。
例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember tasks. Whenever I forget something, I can easily check the list, which makes my work more organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 85.0提案: この回答は内容が具体的で、論理的に展開されていますが、もう少し自然な表現や接続詞を使うとさらに良くなります。例えば、"because"の代わりに"since"や"as"を使うなど工夫しましょう。
例: Some people dislike making lists because writing by hand takes too much time. However, many now prefer typing lists on their phones since it's faster and more convenient, especially as technology improves.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答が不明瞭で繰り返しや言い淀みが多いです。より自然で効果的な答えにするために、簡潔に理由を述べ、接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can check the list anytime. On the other hand, paper lists can be lost or forgotten, which is inconvenient.
文法
× I can't remember the what I have.
✓ I can't remember what I have.
The phrase 'the what I have' is incorrect because 'what' is a pronoun and does not require the definite article 'the' before it. Removing 'the' corrects the sentence.
× if I forgot this that paper I can see check it.
✓ If I forget that paper, I can't check it.
The original sentence has incorrect verb tense and word order. 'Forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context, and 'see check it' is incorrect; 'check it' alone is sufficient. Also, 'this that paper' is confusing; 'that paper' is clearer.
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