List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“make list”应为“make a list”，且“recommend”用词不当。建议使用更自然的表达，并注意冠词和动词搭配。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to remind myself what to buy and to avoid forgetting anything.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“when I when I”，以及表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work. For example, before sending emails to customers, I check my list to ensure everything is correct and nothing is missed.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“don't like the list to award the freedom”不合适。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并注意句子完整性。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. They prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a strict plan.

提案: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整，但有小错误，如“any paper on a pen”应为“any paper or pen”。建议注意介词和连词的使用，使表达更准确。

例: I prefer to make a list on paper because writing by hand helps me remember tasks better. However, if I don't have any paper or pen with me, I use my phone since it's convenient and easy to access anytime.

× Yes, I usually make list when I'm shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I'm shopping.

这里缺少冠词“a”，因为“list”是可数名词，单数形式前需要加冠词。

× I make A to do list when I shop to recommend what I should buy and not to forget something, so I usually do it.

✓ I make a to-do list when I shop to remind myself what I should buy and not to forget anything, so I usually do it.

“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写且连字符连接“to-do list”是固定搭配；“recommend”用错，应为“remind”；“something”用在否定句中应改为“anything”。

× Yes I do. I do make a list for my work.

✓ Yes, I do. I do make a list for my work.

在“Yes”和“I”之间缺少逗号，影响句子结构的清晰。

× For example when I when I send a mail to customers I usually make A to do list to check what everything is correct and ensure nothing was wrong to send to my customer.

✓ For example, when I send mail to customers, I usually make a to-do list to check that everything is correct and ensure nothing is wrong before sending it to my customers.

句子重复“when I”，缺少逗号分隔；“A to do list”应为“a to-do list”；“what everything is correct”表达不当，应为“that everything is correct”；“ensure nothing was wrong to send”时态和表达错误，应为“ensure nothing is wrong before sending”；“customer”应为复数“customers”。

× I think some people dislike making lists because they don't.

✓ I think some people dislike making lists because they don't like them.

句子不完整，“they don't”后应补充宾语“like them”，使句子完整。

× They don't like the list to award the freedom.

✓ They don't like lists because they restrict their freedom.

“the list”用法不当，应为复数“lists”；“award the freedom”表达错误，应为“restrict their freedom”（限制自由）。

× They prefer to do what what they want to do rather than A to do list to limited themselves.

✓ They prefer to do what they want to do rather than follow a to-do list that limits them.

重复“what what”；“A to do list”应为“a to-do list”；“to limited”应为“that limits”；“themselves”用法不当，应为“them”。

× However, if I don't have any paper on a pen with me, I usually use my phone to make a list since it is very convenient and easy to access anytime.

✓ However, if I don't have any paper or a pen with me, I usually use my phone to make a list since it is very convenient and easy to access anytime.

“on a pen”用法错误，应为“or a pen”，表示“纸或笔”。