List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is quite short and unclear. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and provide a reason or example. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve fluency.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

提案: Your answer is understandable but lacks detail and correct grammar. Try to use complete sentences and explain why you don't need a list for work.

例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I can remember my tasks easily and prefer to stay flexible throughout the day.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples, using linking words to improve coherence.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to handle tasks spontaneously, which helps them feel less stressed.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and minor grammar mistakes. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to make your answer smoother.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or add items compared to writing on paper.

× I never make, at least when I shop.

✓ I never make a list, at least when I shop.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'a list' after the verb 'make'. Adding 'a list' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× No, I don't make a list for my work because I don't need.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work because I don't need to.

The verb 'need' requires an infinitive verb after it to complete the meaning. Adding 'to' after 'need' corrects the sentence structure.

× Sometimes people like making list because I think they uh, uh, for God, uh, what they need and uh. Their work is not.

✓ Sometimes people like making lists because I think they, uh, uh, for God, uh, what they need and, uh, their work is not.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to agree with 'people' and the verb 'like making'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and unclear, but the main grammatical correction is the plural form of 'list'.

× Of course, when I, uh, make a list, uh, I prefer do this in my phone because it's more comfortable, uh, than, uh, writing, uh, in the paper.

✓ Of course, when I, uh, make a list, uh, I prefer to do this on my phone because it's more comfortable, uh, than, uh, writing, uh, on paper.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'do'. The preposition 'in' is incorrect for 'phone' and 'paper'; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'the paper' is incorrect here; 'paper' without an article is correct.