List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达的意思基本清楚，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些重复，且缺少连接词使内容显得断裂。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I like to keep my lifestyle organized. This way, I can make sure I buy all the necessary items without forgetting anything.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，如“in most of the time”应为“most of the time”。建议注意语法准确性，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work, and it usually helps me stay organized and productive throughout the day.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且缺少逻辑连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的语法，并用连接词使观点更连贯。

例: Some people might find making lists troublesome because it can be complicated. Also, they may feel that lists don't always help them work or study effectively.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但“white and black handwriting”表达不够准确，建议使用更贴切的词汇，并注意时态一致。

例: I prefer to make lists on paper because seeing my handwriting reminds me of my tasks. Also, it helps me avoid distractions from my phone.

× So I make a list to ensure that I buy all the things necessary.

✓ So I make a list to ensure that I buy all the necessary things.

这里“necessary”是形容词，应该修饰“things”，形容词应放在名词前面，正确表达为“necessary things”。

× Yes, I make a list for my work and it works in most of the time.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it works most of the time.

短语“in most of the time”不正确，正确表达是“most of the time”，表示“在大多数时间”。

× My list for the work helped me stay efficient and energetic.

✓ My list for work helps me stay efficient and energetic.

根据上下文，描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，故将“helped”改为“helps”。

× Maybe making this is a little bit troublesome for them because of its complication and also making this the list don't always do well when they work or study.

✓ Maybe making this is a little bit troublesome for them because of its complications and also making this list doesn't always work well when they work or study.

“complication”应为复数“complications”，表示多种复杂情况；“the list”前的“the”多余，应去掉；“don't”应改为“doesn't”，因为主语是单数“making this list”。

× Maybe making this is a little bit troublesome for them because of its complication and also making this the list don't always do well when they work or study.

✓ Maybe making this is a little bit troublesome for them because of its complications and also making this list doesn't always work well when they work or study.

“making this the list”中“the”使用错误，应去掉；“don't”与单数主语不一致，应改为“doesn't”。

× I prefer to make this on paper because the white and black handwriting on the paper always reminds me to do my things whenever I saw it.

✓ I prefer to make this on paper because the black and white handwriting on the paper always reminds me to do my things whenever I see it.

“white and black”应为“black and white”是固定搭配；“whenever I saw it”时态错误，应为一般现在时“whenever I see it”，因为是习惯性动作。

× I prefer to make this on paper because the white and black handwriting on the paper always reminds me to do my things whenever I saw it.

✓ I prefer to make this on paper because the black and white handwriting on the paper always reminds me to do my things whenever I see it.

“whenever I saw it”时态错误，应使用一般现在时“whenever I see it”，因为描述的是习惯性动作。