List— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you make a list when you shop?
受験者
Most of the time I make a list because I forget something important whenever my mom's told me to buy it. So I make a list and go to sub and it helps me to me by my all things without forgetting.
試験官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
受験者
Yes, I particularly not the least for my work because whatever comes in I just accept and do the work. There is some things which boss told me to do and thus I do it and I don't make.
試験官
Why don't some people like making lists?
受験者
Some people doesn't like making lists because it is too too busy things to keep it. So making list is a very boring thing and it might be it's good.
試験官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
受験者
I think I prefer make a list in the phone because it is more convenient and easy whenever you think sort of idea and it is easy to just take your mobile and just type in and make a list in your notebook.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
スコア: 55.0提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "go to sub" and "helps me to me by my all things." Try to use clearer sentences and correct grammar. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.
例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget important items my mom asks me to buy. Making a list helps me remember everything and shop efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
スコア: 40.0提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. You should directly answer the question and explain clearly whether you make lists for work and if it helps. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I handle tasks as they come. However, when my boss assigns important tasks, I make sure to complete them on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
スコア: 35.0提案: Your answer has grammar errors and unclear expressions like "too too busy things." Try to explain reasons clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid vague phrases like "it might be it's good."
例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. They may prefer to remember things without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
スコア: 50.0提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to express your preference clearly and avoid repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your points.
例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Whenever I have an idea, I can quickly type it on my mobile instead of using a notebook.
文法
× Some people doesn't like making lists because it is too too busy things to keep it.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because it is too busy to keep them.
The subject 'Some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'too too busy things to keep it' is incorrect; it should be 'too busy to keep them' to correctly express the idea and match plural 'lists'. Nepali: 'Some people' बहुवचन भएकाले क्रियापद 'doesn't' होइन 'don't' हुनुपर्छ। साथै 'too too busy things to keep it' वाक्यांश गलत छ, यसलाई 'too busy to keep them' भन्नु उपयुक्त हुन्छ।
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