List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“on”使用不当，且句子结构略显重复。建议简化表达，避免多余词汇，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, absolutely. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything I need to buy. It also prevents me from making impulsive purchases.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“notice me about the deadlines”不自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子流畅性。

例: Yes, I always make a list before starting my homework. It really helps me break down tasks into smaller parts and reminds me of important deadlines.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词，使用更准确的词汇。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their flexibility. For example, strict schedules can make it harder to adapt to unexpected changes during the day or week.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“may the chance may be limited”不合逻辑。建议简化句子，注意连贯性和准确表达。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's portable and I can create a list anytime and anywhere. Making lists on paper is less convenient since I need a pen and paper with me.

× Making a list can help me to stay organized without forgetting about anything I want to buy on.

✓ Making a list can help me to stay organized without forgetting anything I want to buy.

句中“forgetting about anything I want to buy on”中的“forgetting about”用法不当，应该直接用“forgetting anything”来表达“忘记任何东西”，且“buy on”不合适，去掉“on”更自然。

× Additionally, making this can help me to refrain from impetuous purchasing.

✓ Additionally, making a list can help me to refrain from impetuous purchasing.

句中“making this”指代不明，应明确为“making a list”，使句子更清晰。

× Yes, I make a list every time before I start to do my homework.

✓ Yes, I make a list every time before I start doing my homework.

“start to do”虽然不完全错误，但更自然的表达是“start doing”，表示开始做某事。

× It does really work since it helps me to organize while tackling the task into small parts and also notice me about the deadlines.

✓ It really works since it helps me to organize the task into small parts and also reminds me about the deadlines.

“does really work”应为“really works”；“organize while tackling the task into small parts”结构混乱，应改为“organize the task into small parts”；“notice me about”用法错误，应为“remind me about”。

× Umm, some people may don't like making lists because they see them as a kind of a form of restriction that's referring them from making a flexible timeline.

✓ Umm, some people may not like making lists because they see them as a kind of restriction that prevents them from making a flexible timeline.

“may don't like”应为“may not like”；“a kind of a form of restriction”冗余，简化为“a kind of restriction”；“that's referring them from”用法错误，应为“that prevents them from”。

× For example, they may feel that the strict schedules will make them harder to adapt to unexpected change, umm, during the day or the week.

✓ For example, they may feel that strict schedules will make it harder for them to adapt to unexpected changes during the day or the week.

“make them harder to adapt”结构错误，应为“make it harder for them to adapt”；“unexpected change”应为复数“unexpected changes”。

× I would prefer making this on the phone since is really portable and I can make the list at every place or any at any time I want.

✓ I would prefer making this on the phone since it is really portable and I can make the list anywhere at any time I want.

“since is really portable”缺少主语，应为“since it is really portable”；“at every place or any at any time”表达混乱，应改为“anywhere at any time”。

× Instead making a list on paper may the chance may be limited since I need a pen and also also a paper to write the list.

✓ Instead, making a list on paper may be limited because I need a pen and also a paper to write the list.

句子结构混乱，“may the chance may be limited”不合语法，应改为“may be limited”；“also also”重复，应去掉一个。