List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. For example, say "I usually don't make a shopping list because I have a good memory. However, if I have many items to buy, I do make a list to stay organized."

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I have a good memory. However, if I have many items to buy, I do make a list to stay organized.

提案: Your answer is very brief and does not fully address the question. Try to provide a direct response and explain your reasoning or feelings. For example, "No, I haven't tried making a list for work yet because I usually remember my tasks, but I think it could help me stay more organized."

例: No, I haven't tried making a list for work yet because I usually remember my tasks, but I think it could help me stay more organized.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Use linking words and clearer vocabulary. For example, "That's an interesting question. Some people may dislike making lists because they have a strong memory and prefer to remember things without writing them down."

例: That's an interesting question. Some people may dislike making lists because they have a strong memory and prefer to remember things without writing them down.

提案: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains errors. Focus on a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words. Also, avoid unrelated statements. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more practical and convenient. Although some people still use paper lists, I find digital lists easier to manage."

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more practical and convenient. Although some people still use paper lists, I find digital lists easier to manage.

× Usually not because of I have a good mind and when I go to shopping I don't need that one obviously, but if there is big list and large list, do it.

✓ Usually not because I have a good mind and when I go shopping I don't need that one obviously, but if there is a big list or a large list, I do it.

The phrase 'because of I have' is incorrect; 'because' should be followed by a clause without 'of'. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'if there is big list and large list' lacks articles and proper conjunction; it should be 'if there is a big list or a large list'. These corrections improve preposition and article usage.

× Usually not because of I have a good mind and when I go to shopping I don't need that one obviously, but if there is big list and large list, do it.

✓ Usually not because I have a good mind and when I go shopping I don't need that one obviously, but if there is a big list or a large list, I do it.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' is directly followed by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. This is a common prepositional error.

× Usually not because of I have a good mind and when I go to shopping I don't need that one obviously, but if there is big list and large list, do it.

✓ Usually not because I have a good mind and when I go shopping I don't need that one obviously, but if there is a big list or a large list, I do it.

The phrase 'big list and large list' is awkward and lacks articles; it should be 'a big list or a large list' to correctly indicate singular countable nouns with appropriate articles and conjunctions.

× No, I haven't tried it yet.

✓ No, I haven't tried it yet.

No grammatical errors related to the provided problem types in this sentence.

× Oh that one is mind provoking question. Maybe the people who don't like making this dear have good memory and they don't like to listing something because of their mind is strong and can remember everything.

✓ Oh, that is a thought-provoking question. Maybe the people who don't like making lists have good memories and they don't like listing things because their minds are strong and can remember everything.

'That one is mind provoking question' lacks an article and uses an incorrect adjective form; it should be 'that is a thought-provoking question'. 'Making this dear' is incorrect; likely intended 'making lists'. 'Don't like to listing' is incorrect; 'like' should be followed by gerund 'listing' without 'to'. 'Because of their mind is strong' is incorrect; it should be 'because their minds are strong'. These corrections address pronoun use, article use, and verb form errors.

× Oh that one is mind provoking question. Maybe the people who don't like making this dear have good memory and they don't like to listing something because of their mind is strong and can remember everything.

✓ Oh, that is a thought-provoking question. Maybe the people who don't like making lists have good memories and they don't like listing things because their minds are strong and can remember everything.

The phrase 'mind provoking' should be 'thought-provoking' as the correct adjective. Also, 'good memory' should be plural 'good memories' to match the plural subject 'people'. These are adjective and noun form corrections.

× Oh that one is mind provoking question. Maybe the people who don't like making this dear have good memory and they don't like to listing something because of their mind is strong and can remember everything.

✓ Oh, that is a thought-provoking question. Maybe the people who don't like making lists have good memories and they don't like listing things because their minds are strong and can remember everything.

The phrase 'because of their mind is strong' is incorrect; 'because' should be used without 'of' before a clause. Also, 'to listing' is incorrect; 'like' should be followed by gerund without 'to'. These are prepositional errors.

× I prefer make in my phone because it's more practical and useful for me.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more practical and useful for me.

The phrase 'prefer make in my phone' is incorrect. 'Prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus verb ('to make'). Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as the correct preposition for devices.

× But maybe making a list on paper is old fashioned and some of the people don't make it at all.

✓ But maybe making a list on paper is old-fashioned and some people don't make them at all.

'Old fashioned' should be hyphenated as 'old-fashioned' when used as an adjective. 'Some of the people' is better as 'some people' for naturalness. 'Don't make it' is unclear; 'make them' refers to lists (plural). These are article and prepositional usage improvements.

× I prefer to eat in phone.

✓ I prefer to use my phone.

The phrase 'prefer to eat in phone' is incorrect and likely a typo or misuse. The intended meaning is probably 'prefer to use my phone'. 'Eat in phone' is not a correct expression.