List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like 'you know', and use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'plan' instead of 'plane'). Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, I know that making a list helps avoid forgetting items and saves time.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete.

例: No, I don't usually make lists for work because my daily tasks vary a lot. Since my plans change frequently, making a list doesn't help me stay organized.

提案: Your answer is vague and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear opinion with specific reasons, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Some people dislike making lists because their environment changes quickly, especially in the 21st century. Therefore, they feel lists are not useful for unpredictable situations.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains many filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, use correct grammar such as 'there are many apps that help us'.

例: Nowadays, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. Also, there are many apps that make list-making simple and convenient.

× I'm not very focused on sticking to a plane.

✓ I'm not very focused on sticking to a plan.

The word 'plane' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'plan' which means a set of intended actions. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects clarity.

× However, I realize it's, you know, making a list is necessary to avoid for.

✓ However, I realize, you know, making a list is necessary to avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'avoid for' is incorrect. The verb 'avoid' should be followed directly by the object without a preposition. Here, 'mistakes' or a similar noun should be used to complete the meaning.

× I have same answer now there.

✓ I have the same answer now.

The phrase 'same answer now there' is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Same answer' is singular and should be preceded by 'the'. The word 'there' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× Unfortunately I don't make lists at my job because my everyday is not similar.

✓ Unfortunately, I don't make lists at my job because my everyday tasks are not similar.

The word 'everyday' is an adjective meaning 'commonplace'. The noun intended here is likely 'everyday tasks' or 'everyday activities', which is plural. Also, 'is not similar' should agree with the plural noun.

× It's always change and my plans change also and I think it's not help me to.

✓ It always changes and my plans change also, and I think it does not help me.

The verb 'change' needs to be in the third person singular present tense 'changes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'it's not help me to' is incorrect; it should be 'it does not help me'.

× I think reason is environment is changing especially in 21 century and it's does not help us usually in usual and that's all I think.

✓ I think the reason is the environment is changing, especially in the 21st century, and it usually does not help us, and that's all I think.

Missing articles 'the' before 'reason', 'environment', and '21st century'. The phrase 'it's does not help us usually in usual' is incorrect; correct form is 'it usually does not help us'. Also, '21 century' should be '21st century'.

× Nowadays I, I prefer on my phone, uh, because, umm, my phone is always with me and uh, it's very simple to use it and uh, also, uh, there is many, uh, app which help us.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer using my phone because my phone is always with me, and it's very simple to use. Also, there are many apps which help us.

The phrase 'prefer on my phone' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prefer using my phone'. 'There is many app' is incorrect because 'app' is countable and plural form 'apps' requires 'there are'. Also, 'which help us' is correct but the sentence needed restructuring for clarity.