List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating the same idea twice and try to use linking words to make your answer smoother. For example, you can say why making a list helps you specifically.

例: Sometimes I make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

提案: Your answer has grammar mistakes and is incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to explain why making a list would be helpful for your work.

例: I don't usually make lists for my work, but I think it would be helpful because it can keep me organized and ensure I don't forget important tasks.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some errors and could be more fluent. Use correct vocabulary ('list' instead of 'lease') and connect your ideas clearly with linking words.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time and they believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

提案: Your answer is clear but has many fillers like 'uh' and 'umm'. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to explain your preference more naturally.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I always have my phone with me.

× Sometimes I do, sometimes I don't, but I think it's better for me to make a list not to forget. Any not to forget something.

✓ Sometimes I do, sometimes I don't, but I think it's better for me to make a list so I don't forget anything.

The original sentence has a sentence fragment 'Any not to forget something' which is incomplete and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a complete sentence using 'so I don't forget anything' to express purpose clearly.

× Mine never make a list for my work, but I think it will be better for me to do so because it will be more helpful for me and I will.

✓ I never make a list for my work, but I think it would be better for me to do so because it would be more helpful for me.

The original sentence uses 'Mine' incorrectly instead of 'I' and ends abruptly with 'and I will.' The correction uses the correct pronoun 'I' and completes the thought properly. Also, 'would be' is used to express a hypothetical situation.

× Maybe because they don't want to waste time in making lease and they believe that they will remember every detail and that's why.

✓ Maybe because they don't want to waste time making lists and they believe that they will remember every detail; that's why.

The original sentence has 'in making lease' which is incorrect; it should be 'making lists.' Also, the sentence ends with 'and that's why' which is incomplete. The correction fixes the noun and completes the sentence with proper punctuation.