List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有點重複且語句不夠流暢，建議你在回答時注意語句的連貫性，避免重複使用相同的詞彙，並且注意語法結構，使回答更自然且有效。

例: Usually, I don't make a shopping list because I can remember what I need to buy. Also, I find it inconvenient to carry a list with me when I shop.

提案: 你的回答有點不完整且語句結尾不清楚，建議你在回答時使用完整的句子，並且用連接詞使句子更流暢，這樣能讓你的回答更有條理且易懂。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete. Making a list helps me avoid forgetting important things and reminds me of what I need to do.

提案: 你的回答內容有點重複且語法不夠正確，建議你在回答時注意句子結構，避免重複詞彙，並且提供更具體的理由，使回答更有說服力。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it inconvenient to carry paper and pencil. Also, some believe they can remember everything without a list or simply don't feel the need for one.

提案: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和重複詞彙，建議你在回答時注意語法正確性，並且使用連接詞使句子更流暢，這樣能讓你的回答更自然且清晰。

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's easier to update my list anytime, and there are many useful apps available.

× Usually I don't make a list because I can remember the thing I should buy in my mind, so I don't I and I think it it is inconvenient for me to make the list and carry it with me, so I don't make a list when I shopping.

✓ Usually I don't make a list because I can remember the things I should buy in my mind, so I don't, and I think it is inconvenient for me to make the list and carry it with me, so I don't make a list when I am shopping.

The phrase 'when I shopping' is incorrect because the verb 'shopping' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'when I am shopping'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.

× Usually I don't make a list because I can remember the thing I should buy in my mind, so I don't I and I think it it is inconvenient for me to make the list and carry it with me, so I don't make a list when I shopping.

✓ Usually I don't make a list because I can remember the things I should buy in my mind, so I don't, and I think it is inconvenient for me to make the list and carry it with me, so I don't make a list when I am shopping.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because the speaker refers to multiple items to buy. Using singular 'thing' is incorrect in this context.

× Yes, I always make the list on my work because I have a lot of text to complete and making a list can prevent me from forgetting anything important on my work and also remind me something important when I need it so it's.

✓ Yes, I always make the list for my work because I have a lot of tasks to complete and making a list can prevent me from forgetting anything important at work and also remind me of something important when I need it.

The phrase 'on my work' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' when referring to making a list related to work. Also, 'text' should be 'tasks' to fit the context. Additionally, 'remind me something' should be 'remind me of something' to use the correct preposition.

× Yes, I always make the list on my work because I have a lot of text to complete and making a list can prevent me from forgetting anything important on my work and also remind me something important when I need it so it's.

✓ Yes, I always make the list for my work because I have a lot of tasks to complete and making a list can prevent me from forgetting anything important at work and also remind me of something important when I need it.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'my work'. The correct prepositions are 'for my work' when referring to making a list related to work, and 'at work' when referring to the location or context of work. Also, 'remind me something' requires the preposition 'of' to be correct.

× Yes, I always make the list on my work because I have a lot of text to complete and making a list can prevent me from forgetting anything important on my work and also remind me something important when I need it so it's.

✓ Yes, I always make the list for my work because I have a lot of tasks to complete and making a list can prevent me from forgetting anything important at work and also remind me of something important when I need it.

The word 'text' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'tasks' to refer to work items. 'Text' is singular and usually refers to written content, not work assignments.

× I think the reason for this is maybe those people think making the list is too is inconvenient because you need a pencil and a paper and carry it with you and maybe they they can remember all the things or they don't think that they need a list.

✓ I think the reason for this is maybe those people think making a list is too inconvenient because you need a pencil and paper and carry it with you, and maybe they can remember all the things or they don't think that they need a list.

The phrase 'making the list' should be 'making a list' because it refers to the general action, not a specific list. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here and does not need an article. The phrase 'a pencil and a paper' should be 'a pencil and paper'.

× I think the reason for this is maybe those people think making the list is too is inconvenient because you need a pencil and a paper and carry it with you and maybe they they can remember all the things or they don't think that they need a list.

✓ I think the reason for this is maybe those people think making a list is too inconvenient because you need a pencil and paper and carry it with you, and maybe they can remember all the things or they don't think that they need a list.

The article 'the' before 'list' is incorrect because it refers to lists in general, so 'a list' is appropriate. Also, 'a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is uncountable in this context and should not have an article.

× I prefer making making a list by phone because I always carry my everywhere I go and so it is easier to for me to update my list anytime and also is have many usable apps on my phone.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I always carry it everywhere I go, so it is easier for me to update my list anytime and it also has many useful apps on my phone.

The phrase 'making making' is a repetition error; it should be 'making'. 'By phone' is better expressed as 'on my phone' when referring to using a phone as a device. 'Carry my everywhere' is incorrect; it should be 'carry it everywhere' referring to the phone. 'Is have' is incorrect; it should be 'it also has'. 'Usable apps' is better expressed as 'useful apps'.