List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but try to avoid very long sentences to improve naturalness and clarity. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. I divide the list into sections like groceries and household items. This way, I can stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying, so I save both time and money.

提案: Your answer has good content but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'A to do list', 'follow a lease'). Try to use correct articles and clarify your points. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I definitely make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organised and focused. I usually use a digital app that sends me reminders. As a result, my productivity increases, and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I complete all my tasks.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some awkward phrasing ('making this', 'every tasks'). Try to use more natural expressions and correct plural forms. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to improve coherence.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They trust their memory to remember all tasks, so they prefer to start working immediately instead of writing things down.

提案: Your answer is natural and clear. To improve, you can add a linking word like 'for instance' or 'such as' to introduce your example more smoothly.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have it with me, which is very convenient. For instance, when I'm out shopping, I can quickly add or remove items without worrying about losing a piece of paper.

× Yes, I definitely make A to do list for my work.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a to-do list for my work.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' because it is not at the beginning of the sentence. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the compound noun.

× Some individuals perceive making this as time consuming.

✓ Some individuals perceive making this as time-consuming.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated to form the compound adjective 'time-consuming' modifying the noun phrase correctly.

× They feel confident in their ability to remember every tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to rely on their memory and would rather use that time to dive straight into their work.

✓ They feel confident in their ability to remember every task without writing them down, so they prefer to rely on their memory and would rather use that time to dive straight into their work.

The word 'tasks' should be singular 'task' because it follows 'every', which requires a singular noun.