List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'help' nên là 'helps'). Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ ý, tránh câu bị bỏ dở và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time. For example, when I buy groceries, I list all the items I need so I don't forget anything.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu bị ngắt quãng và thiếu liên kết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể, đồng thời dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the important tasks. For example, when I plan my day, I write down exercises I need to complete and follow the list carefully.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không liên quan và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh những phần không liên quan.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and time-consuming. They may prefer to remember things mentally or feel that lists limit their flexibility.

提案: Bạn có ý trả lời tốt nhưng câu thứ hai bị lặp từ và câu cuối cùng chưa rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và làm rõ ý hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient. I can easily add or delete items as needed. For example, when I go shopping, I simply open an app and check my list to make sure I don't forget anything.

× Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it help me remember everything I need and save time.

✓ Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and save time.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× For example, when I buy groceries I.

✓ For example, when I buy groceries, I make a list.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb or predicate. It needs to be completed to form a proper sentence.

× I usually make a list from my work because it help me stay organized and remember all the important tasks.

✓ I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the important tasks.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'make a list from my work' is incorrect preposition usage; 'for my work' is correct.

× For example, when I planned so far, I picked a list of exercise to follow with my.

✓ For example, so far, I have planned and picked a list of exercises to follow.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and incomplete structure. 'Planned so far' should be present perfect 'have planned' to indicate an action up to now. 'Picked a list of exercise' should be 'picked a list of exercises' (plural). The sentence is also incomplete and needs restructuring.

× Work this.

✓ I usually make a list for my work.

The phrase 'Work this.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be a complete sentence explaining the action.

× Samphi Pudungalani, kingly speaker.

✓ Some people find it boring and time-consuming.

The original sentence is unclear and does not answer the question. It should be a complete sentence explaining why some people don't like making lists.

× Convenient and I can easily add or delete items.

✓ It is convenient, and I can easily add or delete items.

The word 'Convenient' is used as a sentence fragment. It should be connected properly with a subject and verb to form a complete sentence.

× I usually make a list from my work because it help me stay organized and remember all the important tasks.

✓ I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and remember all the important tasks.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate purpose or relation.