List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“it's so tribal”可能是想表达“it's troublesome”或“it's boring”。建议你使用更准确的词汇，并且注意句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to browse and buy my favorite items spontaneously.

提案: 你的回答结构较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，例如使用“because”或“which helps”。同时，细节可以更具体，说明如何提高效率和质量。

例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For example, when I do homework, making a list improves my efficiency and the quality of my work.

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误，如“some people is”应为“some people are”，并且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达方式，并给出具体原因。

例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming, while others may simply prefer to be spontaneous.

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和不完整的句子，如“on my”后缺少名词。建议完整表达并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: When I go out, I always make a list on my phone because it's very convenient. However, when I do homework, I prefer to make a list on paper since it's clearer and more useful for me.

× No I don't like make a list I think it's so tribal and when I should go shopping I always like read and purchase and I or buy my favorite things.

✓ No, I don't like making a list. I think it's so trivial, and when I go shopping, I always like reading and purchasing or buying my favorite things.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（-ing），如 'like making' 而不是 'like make'。此外，'tribal' 应为 'trivial'，表示琐碎的意思。句子中缺少逗号，影响理解。建议注意动词后接动名词的用法，并检查单词拼写。

× No I don't like make a list I think it's so tribal and when I should go shopping I always like read and purchase and I or buy my favorite things.

✓ No, I don't like making a list. I think it's so trivial, and when I go shopping, I always like reading and purchasing or buying my favorite things.

'when I should go shopping' 中 'should' 用法不当，正确表达为 'when I go shopping'。建议注意时间状语从句中动词的正确使用。

× No I don't like make a list I think it's so tribal and when I should go shopping I always like read and purchase and I or buy my favorite things.

✓ No, I don't like making a list. I think it's so trivial, and when I go shopping, I always like reading and purchasing or buying my favorite things.

句中 'I always like read and purchase' 应为 'I always like reading and purchasing'，动词形式需与习惯动作保持一致。

× I think some people have individual opinion and they think it's so terrible or some people is so lazy they don't like take a list.

✓ I think some people have individual opinions and they think it's so terrible, or some people are so lazy they don't like to take a list.

'individual opinion' 应为复数 'individual opinions'，因为指的是一些人的不同看法。'some people is' 应为 'some people are'，主谓一致。

× I think some people have individual opinion and they think it's so terrible or some people is so lazy they don't like take a list.

✓ I think some people have individual opinions and they think it's so terrible, or some people are so lazy they don't like to take a list.

'some people' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'，保持主谓一致。

× I think some people have individual opinion and they think it's so terrible or some people is so lazy they don't like take a list.

✓ I think some people have individual opinions and they think it's so terrible, or some people are so lazy they don't like to take a list.

'don't like take a list' 中缺少介词 'to'，应为 'don't like to take a list'。建议注意动词后接不定式的正确用法。

× When I go out, I always make a list on my. I think it's so convenient for me.

✓ When I go out, I always make a list on my phone. I think it's so convenient for me.

句子中 'on my' 不完整，缺少名词 'phone'，导致表达不清。建议完整表达介词短语。