List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and clarity. Try to form complete sentences and avoid pauses or fragmented phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how the list helps you.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me buy only what I need. For example, by following the list, I avoid buying unnecessary items, which saves both time and money.

提案: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and better vocabulary. Try to explain how making a list helps you manage your tasks effectively, using linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I always make a to-do list in the morning because it helps me organise my tasks for the day. This way, I can focus on completing important work without getting distracted or wasting time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to explain reasons logically. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases and focus on the main point.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they find the process boring and time-consuming. Moreover, they may prefer to do tasks spontaneously rather than following a strict order.

提案: Your answer has good content but needs better sentence flow and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain clearly why you prefer using your phone over paper for making lists.

例: I used to make lists on paper, but nowadays I prefer using my phone because it is more convenient. Also, lists on the phone are less likely to get lost compared to paper notes.

× Yes, definitely I would make a list when.

✓ Yes, definitely I would make a list when I go shopping.

The original sentence ends abruptly and incorrectly uses 'when.' It should be followed by a verb in the -ing form or a clause. Here, 'go shopping' is the correct form to express the action happening when making a list.

× I go for shopping because it's very convenient for me.

✓ I go shopping because it's very convenient for me.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'for.' This is a common collocation in English.

× To buy things according to the list of it makes me.

✓ Buying things according to the list makes it easier for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks a proper subject and verb structure. Rewriting it as 'Buying things according to the list makes it easier for me' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Help to avoid unnecessary things which I would grab anyways.

✓ It helps me avoid unnecessary things which I would grab anyway.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb. Adding 'It helps me' provides the subject and verb, and 'anyways' should be 'anyway' as the correct adverb form.

× Yes, in the morning it's the first thing I always make a list or To Do List to what to do.

✓ Yes, in the morning, the first thing I always do is make a list or To Do List of what to do.

The original sentence misuses 'to what to do.' The correct preposition is 'of' to indicate the content of the list. Also, the sentence structure is improved by reordering for clarity.

× In that particular. Stay so that it will be easy for me to help.

✓ In that particular way, it will be easy for me to manage tasks.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Stay' is incorrect here. Replacing it with 'way' and completing the sentence clarifies the meaning.

× Achieving our task rather than finding insulting other things and wasting my time.

✓ Achieving our tasks rather than getting distracted by other things and wasting my time.

The phrase 'finding insulting other things' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'getting distracted by other things.' Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match context.

× Some people won't like making list because they find it very annoying or boring.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it very annoying or boring.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' to refer to the general activity. Also, 'won't like' is better expressed as 'don't like' for habitual actions.

× The thing and right? And then sought out in a sequential manner.

✓ They prefer to organize things in a sequential manner.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Rewriting them into a clear sentence conveys the intended meaning.

× So they do not perform making such kind of list.

✓ So they do not make such kinds of lists.

'Perform making' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make.' Also, 'such kind of list' should be pluralized to 'such kinds of lists' to match the context.

× Previously I will make a list on a paper but in today's world as everyone has phone so I generally before making listeners phone because.

✓ Previously, I would make a list on paper, but in today's world, as everyone has a phone, I generally make lists on my phone because...

'Make a list on a paper' should be 'on paper' without 'a.' 'Listeners phone' is incorrect; it should be 'my phone.' The sentence is also restructured for clarity.

× It's very convenient and if we make a list and pay for the paper may be lost by me, so in the phone it always remains.

✓ It's very convenient, and if we make a list on paper, it may be lost, but on the phone, it always remains.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Rewriting it with proper conjunctions and structure improves clarity and correctness.