List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I tend to forget things easily. My mother advised me to write down what I need so I don't miss anything.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and use linking words to explain how making a list helped you. Also, keep your sentences concise and natural.

例: Yes, during my school days, I used to make a timetable to organise my daily tasks. This helped me manage my time effectively and complete my work on time.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains errors. Try to express your opinion clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your point logically.

例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and can remember tasks easily without writing them down.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing.

例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember things better and also improves my writing skills.

× Yes, basically I require a list for every single thing because I'm a person who for get every single thing and after some time my mom advised mean that I have to make a small list that how I work for a day and a how to shop something.

✓ Yes, basically I require a list for every single thing because I'm a person who forgets every single thing and after some time my mom advised me that I have to make a small list of how I work for a day and how to shop for something.

The pronoun 'mean' is incorrect and should be 'me' to correctly refer to the speaker. Also, 'for get' should be 'forget' as one word. The phrase 'that how I work for a day and a how to shop something' is awkward and corrected to 'of how I work for a day and how to shop for something' to improve clarity and grammar.

× When I was in my school life, I used to make a timetable basically considered as a list of work and I make a schedule of my full day that how I will working for a day.

✓ When I was in my school life, I used to make a timetable basically considered as a list of work and I made a schedule of my full day showing how I would work for a day.

The verb 'make' should be in past tense 'made' to match the past context. Also, 'that how I will working for a day' is incorrect; it should be 'showing how I would work for a day' to correctly express future in the past and proper verb form.

× In my perspective, some people have a good distance of memorizing things and there doesn't need any type of list and they have a good. Membering Pow.

✓ In my perspective, some people have a good memory for memorizing things and they don't need any type of list and they have a good memorizing power.

The phrase 'have a good distance of memorizing things' is incorrect; it should be 'have a good memory for memorizing things'. Also, 'there doesn't need any type of list' is incorrect; it should be 'they don't need any type of list'. The phrase 'Membering Pow' is corrected to 'memorizing power' for clarity.

× I usually make a list on paper because I think by retaining by writing on paper, we can also improve our writing skills and I have a good hand exercise.

✓ I usually make a list on paper because I think that by writing on paper, we can also improve our writing skills and get good hand exercise.

The phrase 'by retaining by writing on paper' is awkward and redundant; it is corrected to 'by writing on paper'. Also, 'I have a good hand exercise' is incorrect; it should be 'get good hand exercise' to express the benefit properly.