List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'shove' thay vì 'shop', và câu trả lời hơi dài dòng, thiếu sự mạch lạc và liên kết giữa các ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I find it inconvenient to check it while shopping. However, I know that making a list helps me remember everything I need to buy.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'Are prefer' thay vì 'I prefer', và câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work every day. It helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. I prefer daily lists because they allow me to focus on short-term goals, which reduces my stress.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt về nội dung và cấu trúc, nhưng bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ như 'an inconvenience' thay vì 'an inconvenience'. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và cụ thể hơn.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they tend to procrastinate and struggle to stay organized. Moreover, frequently checking the list can be distracting and inconvenient for them.

提案: Bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như 'assess' thay vì 'access', 'send' thay vì 'since', 'making a lease' thay vì 'making a list', và câu cuối chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập phát âm và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's convenient and easy to access. On the other hand, paper lists can be lost or damaged, so using my phone helps me stay organized.

× I don't make a list when I shove, even though I know that it is a very effective way in order to remember all the things that I need to buy an actually buy it.

✓ I don't make a list when I shop, even though I know that it is a very effective way to remember all the things that I need to buy and actually buy them.

The word 'shove' is a typo and should be 'shop'. Also, 'an actually buy it' is incorrect; it should be 'and actually buy them' to match the plural 'things'. This corrects singular/plural agreement and word choice.

× But I think sometime is kind of inconvenience for me to look at the list when I'm when I'm doing the shopping.

✓ But I think sometimes it is kind of inconvenient for me to look at the list when I'm doing the shopping.

The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Inconvenience' is a noun, but here an adjective 'inconvenient' is needed. Also, 'when I'm when I'm' is repetitive; one 'when I'm' is enough.

× So I don't have the record of through the things that I want to buy.

✓ So I don't keep a record of the things that I want to buy.

The phrase 'record of through the things' is incorrect and unclear. The correct phrase is 'keep a record of the things'. This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× With my work, I usually make A to do list of tasks that I need to complete each day.

✓ With my work, I usually make a to-do list of tasks that I need to complete each day.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' as it is a compound adjective.

× Are prefer making up daily list because if I find it easier to focus on short term goals which will reduce my stress and keeping me.

✓ I prefer making up a daily list because I find it easier to focus on short-term goals which reduce my stress and keep me focused.

'Are' is incorrect; it should be 'I'. 'Daily list' needs an article 'a'. 'If I find' should be 'I find'. 'Short term' should be hyphenated 'short-term'. 'Keeping me' should be 'keep me focused' to complete the idea.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they tend to procrastinate and find it difficult to follow the task and stay organized.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they tend to procrastinate and find it difficult to follow tasks and stay organized.

'The task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the general meaning. This corrects the use of the definite article and conjunction for parallel structure.

× Also, constantly checking the list to see if they are doing well can be distracting, an inconvenience for them.

✓ Also, constantly checking the list to see if they are doing well can be distracting and an inconvenience for them.

The conjunction 'an' is incorrect here; it should be 'and' to connect two nouns 'distracting' and 'an inconvenience' properly.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It is so convenient and easy to assess.

✓ It is so convenient and easy to access.

The word 'assess' means to evaluate, but the intended meaning is 'access', meaning to reach or use something. This is a word choice error.

× Using paper can be risky send it might get lost or damage.

✓ Using paper can be risky since it might get lost or damaged.

'Send' is a typo and should be 'since'. Also, 'damage' should be 'damaged' to be an adjective describing the paper.

× Therefore, making a lease on my phone a small practical an helps me stay organized.

✓ Therefore, making a list on my phone is small, practical, and helps me stay organized.

'Lease' is a typo for 'list'. The sentence structure is incorrect; it needs a verb 'is' and proper conjunctions. 'Small practical an' is incorrect; it should be 'small, practical, and'.