List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，避免重复提问，使用连贯的句子表达购物清单的好处。

例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items and saves money.

提案: 回答基本符合要求，但表达不够流畅，'make a list from my work'表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly, and it works very well.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much effort, which can sometimes be true.

提案: 回答语句不完整且含糊，语法错误严重。建议清晰表达偏好，说明原因，并使用连贯的句子。

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I always have my phone with me.

× Yes, are you really making a shopping list? Because it helps me avoid buying things I don't need.

✓ Yes, I really make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying things I don't need.

这里学生回答时使用了疑问句形式“are you really making”，但实际上应该用陈述句表达自己的习惯行为，且时态应为一般现在时，表示经常性动作。

× Yes, I usually make a list from my work because it helps me organize my task clearly.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly.

介词“from”用错了，正确表达是“make a list for my work”，表示为工作制作清单。另外，“task”应为复数形式“tasks”，因为通常有多个任务。

× Yes, I usually make a list from my work because it helps me organize my task clearly.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly.

“task”应使用复数形式“tasks”，因为工作中通常包含多个任务。

× Some people don't like making this because they felt that it was too much tired effort is sometimes can be true.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they feel that it is too tiring; sometimes this can be true.

时态错误，“felt”应改为现在时“feel”，因为前半句是一般现在时描述习惯。句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× Some people don't like making this because they felt that it was too much tired effort is sometimes can be true.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they feel that it is too tiring; sometimes this can be true.

“this”指代不明确，应改为“lists”。另外，句子中“too much tired effort”表达不自然，应改为“too tiring”。

× Some people don't like making this because they felt that it was too much tired effort is sometimes can be true.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they feel that it is too tiring; sometimes this can be true.

原句结构混乱，缺少连贯性，需拆分并调整句子，使其语义清晰通顺。

× I prefer to make at least on my phone before, he said.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient.

句子结构混乱，“at least on my phone before, he said”无意义且语法错误，需重构句子表达清晰的意思。

× It's more convenient and why I'm doing something.

✓ It's more convenient when I'm doing something.

“and why”用法错误，应使用“when”引导时间状语从句。

× My phone is always so easily.

✓ My phone is always very easy to use.

“easily”是副词，不能修饰“phone”，应使用形容词“easy”并补充完整表达。