List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Avoid redundancy and ensure sentences are complete and natural. For example, say 'Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because I easily forget things.'

例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget items otherwise.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use simple and clear sentences. For example, say 'Yes, I always make a list for my work, and it always helps me stay organized.'

例: Yes, I always prepare a list for my work tasks, and it helps me complete them efficiently.

提案: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your opinion clearly with reasons. For example, 'Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or restrictive.'

例: Some people avoid making lists because they feel it limits their flexibility or takes extra time.

提案: Your answer has a contradiction and grammatical errors. Instead of 'time consuming', you might mean 'time-saving'. Use clear and correct expressions. For example, 'I usually make a list on my phone because it is convenient and saves time.'

例: I prefer making lists on my phone since it is convenient and helps me save time.

× Yes, I make a list when I go for her shopping because of I easily forget things.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because I easily forget things.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used here; it should be omitted as the sentence refers to the speaker's own shopping. Also, 'because of I easily forget things' is incorrect; it should be 'because I easily forget things' without 'of'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I always make up or make a list for my my work and you're in it always work.

✓ Yes, I always make up or make a list for my work and it always works.

The phrase 'my my work' contains a repeated word; it should be 'my work'. 'You're in it always work' is incorrect; it should be 'it always works' to correctly refer to the list's effectiveness. Correct pronoun usage and sentence structure are necessary for clarity.

× I think some people like people like making list because of their 4 bit or themes. So it does it is a best choice or two. Make a list.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because of their habits or themes. So, it is the best choice to make a list.

The original sentence has pronoun misuse and unclear phrases. 'People like people like' is redundant. 'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'Because of their 4 bit or themes' is unclear; likely intended as 'habits or themes'. 'It does it is a best choice or two' is incorrect; corrected to 'it is the best choice'. Proper pronoun and article usage improve meaning.

× I usually make a list on my phone because it is a convenient and time consuming.

✓ I usually make a list on my phone because it is convenient and time-saving.

The article 'a' before 'convenient' is incorrect because 'convenient' is an adjective describing 'it' (the phone or list), which is uncountable here. Also, 'time consuming' should be 'time-saving' to express the intended meaning. Correct adjective usage and collocations are important for clarity.