List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured, but you can improve by correcting minor grammar errors and using more natural expressions. For example, say "before I go shopping" instead of "before I go shop" and avoid redundancy like "so I can save both time and money" by combining ideas more smoothly.

例: Yes, I usually make a list of all the items I need before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. I organize my list into sections like groceries and household items, which helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying, saving both time and money.

提案: Your answer is relevant and informative, but you should improve sentence flow and grammar. For example, say "I definitely make a to-do list for my work" and avoid starting sentences with 'And'. Use linking words like 'Moreover' or 'Additionally' to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I definitely make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused throughout the day. Moreover, I use a digital app that sends me reminders. As a result, my productivity increases, and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I complete my tasks.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "making list assign consuming" is incorrect; you can say "making lists is time-consuming." Also, avoid repeating 'and' excessively; use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it is time-consuming. They feel confident in their memory and prefer to start working immediately without writing tasks down.

提案: Your answer is good but has minor errors such as 'Remo' instead of 'remove'. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence. For example, use 'Moreover' or 'In addition' to connect ideas.

例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, which is very convenient. For instance, when I'm out, I can easily add or remove items as needed without worrying about losing a piece of paper.

× Some individuals perceive making list assign consuming.

✓ Some individuals perceive making lists as time-consuming.

The original sentence has incorrect verb form and missing preposition. 'Making list assign consuming' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists as time-consuming'. 'Making' is a gerund here, 'lists' should be plural (see plural issue), and 'as' is the correct preposition to link the perception with the description. Also, 'time-consuming' is the correct adjective phrase to describe the activity.

× Some individuals perceive making list assign consuming.

✓ Some individuals perceive making lists as time-consuming.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not a single list. Using plural form is necessary to express the general concept.

× Some individuals perceive making list assign consuming.

✓ Some individuals perceive making lists as time-consuming.

The phrase 'assign consuming' is incorrect. The correct preposition to link the verb 'perceive' with the description is 'as'. So, 'making lists as time-consuming' is the correct form.

× I usually make a list of all the items I need before I go shop to ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ I usually make a list of all the items I need before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' when indicating the activity of shopping. 'Go shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'.

× I usually make a list of all the items I need before I go shop to ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ I usually make a list of all the items I need before I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important.

After the verb 'go' to indicate an activity, the verb should be in the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'go shopping' is correct instead of 'go shop'.

× I usually use a digital app to keep track of my work list which sends me reminders.

✓ I usually use a digital app to keep track of my work list, which sends me reminders.

A comma is needed before 'which' to correctly separate the relative clause. This is a punctuation issue related to sentence clarity.

× Yes, I definitely make it To Do List for my work.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a To-Do List for my work.

The phrase 'make it To Do List' is incorrect. 'It' is unnecessary and 'To Do List' should be preceded by an article 'a' and hyphenated as 'To-Do List'. Also, 'make a To-Do List' is the correct collocation.

× And I think my productivity increases when I follow a list and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I finish my tasks.

✓ I think my productivity increases when I follow a list, and I feel a sense of accomplishment when I finish my tasks.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and can be avoided. Also, a comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity. This is a sentence structure and style issue.

× For example, when I'm out, I can easily add or Remo items whenever I need to without worrying about losing a piece of paper.

✓ For example, when I'm out, I can easily add or remove items whenever I need to without worrying about losing a piece of paper.

The word 'Remo' is a typo and should be 'remove'. Correct spelling is necessary for clarity and correctness.