List— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details without repetition. Avoid filler words like 'you know' and repeated phrases.

例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I mostly buy essentials online from stores like Amazon or Alibaba. When I shop online, I search for the items I need, which acts like a list for me.

提案: Provide a clear and direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

例: I do make an agenda for my work, but I often don't follow it. Although I plan and schedule tasks, I find it hard to stick to the agenda. However, I believe making lists works well for other people.

提案: Clarify your ideas and avoid vague expressions. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to express your opinion clearly.

例: Some people dislike making lists because they think it's useless or a waste of time. They prefer to work spontaneously without relying on lists to motivate or guide them.

提案: Answer directly and clearly, then support with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear references. Use correct vocabulary and grammar to improve fluency and coherence.

例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier and faster. Nowadays, artificial intelligence tools can help organize schedules automatically, which saves time compared to writing on paper.

× I don't usually make a list when I shop because I just, I always do like online shopping, you know, like buying food, like essentials from from online stores like Amazon or Alibaba.

✓ I don't usually make a list when I shop because I always do online shopping, you know, like buying food essentials from online stores like Amazon or Alibaba.

The phrase 'I always do like online shopping' is awkward and incorrect. The verb 'do' should not be followed by 'like' in this context. Instead, 'I always do online shopping' or 'I always shop online' is correct. Also, the repeated word 'from' is a typographical error and should be corrected.

× So the things I will just search on it, I will make a list, yeah.

✓ So the things I will just search for, I will make a list, yeah.

The phrase 'search on it' is incorrect; the correct preposition with 'search' is 'for'. Also, 'the things' is acceptable here as plural, but the preposition needs correction.

× So I'll make agenda for my work, but don't really work for me.

✓ So I'll make an agenda for my work, but it doesn't really work for me.

The word 'agenda' is a singular countable noun and requires an article 'an'. Also, the phrase 'don't really work for me' lacks a subject; it should be 'it doesn't really work for me' to agree with singular 'agenda'.

× I don't, I usually like follow, follow my agenda.

✓ I don't, I usually like to follow my agenda.

The verb 'like' is typically followed by the infinitive form 'to follow' rather than the bare verb 'follow' in this context.

× It's just like I'm planning it. I planted and make a schedule for it, but I don't follow it.

✓ It's just like I'm planning it. I planned and made a schedule for it, but I don't follow it.

The verbs 'planted' and 'make' are inconsistent in tense and form. 'Planted' is incorrect here; the correct past tense of 'plan' is 'planned'. Also, 'make' should be in past tense 'made' to match the past action.

× Maybe, maybe they're just thinking that it's useless, that's not that useful.

✓ Maybe, maybe they're just thinking that it's useless, that it's not that useful.

The phrase 'that's not that useful' is a fragment and unclear. Replacing 'that's' with 'that it's' clarifies the meaning and maintains grammatical correctness.

× Also maybe the things that's annoying to make olicity thing is a waste of time.

✓ Also maybe the thing that's annoying to make a list is a waste of time.

The phrase 'the things that's' is incorrect; 'things' is plural and should be 'things that' or 'thing that's' if singular. Also, 'olicity thing' seems to be a mishearing or typo; likely intended 'a list'. The sentence is corrected accordingly.

× So they don't need a list to give them momentum to work or give them go to achieve, they just do whatever they want and they won't make lists for that.

✓ So they don't need a list to give them momentum to work or to help them achieve their goals; they just do whatever they want and don't make lists for that.

The phrase 'give them go to achieve' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to 'help them achieve their goals' for clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, the sentence is split for better structure.

× I'll just make it make it on the phone.

✓ I'll just make it on the phone.

The phrase 'make it make it' is a repetition error. Removing the duplicate improves clarity.

× It's way more easier.

✓ It's way easier.

The word 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; adding 'more' is redundant and incorrect.

× And nowadays with artificial intelligence is you can use Chaturbate, like to organize your schedule or your lists.

✓ And nowadays with artificial intelligence, you can use ChatGPT to organize your schedule or your lists.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'artificial intelligence' and contains a likely mishearing or typo 'Chaturbate' instead of 'ChatGPT'. Correcting these improves clarity and accuracy.

× So you don't need to like type by yourself or like write on paper by itself.

✓ So you don't need to type by yourself or write on paper yourself.

The phrase 'write on paper by itself' is incorrect; 'by itself' is not appropriate here. 'Yourself' is the correct reflexive pronoun to indicate the subject performing the action.

× It's kind of time consuming and so it's difficult to do it.

✓ It's kind of time-consuming and so it's difficult to do.

The term 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also, 'do it' is redundant after 'difficult to do' and can be omitted for conciseness.